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Poet deVine
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0 posted 05-07-2000 11:58 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Poet deVine

The soft sounds of summer leaves
That dance in the forest cathedral
Songs of birds never heard
Resound in the forest primeval

A place within this world untouched
Never seen by human eyes
A pristine place that hides my soul
Where Angels wings are sighs

Worldly is my everyday name
But my heart holds a passion true
Every day, every moment I live,
I live to love just you.

© Copyright 2000 Poet deVine - All Rights Reserved
netswan
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1 posted 05-08-2000 12:01 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Lovely description -- Poet devine
And a truly sweet poem, sigh.

netswan
Janet Marie
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2 posted 05-08-2000 12:04 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

PD...
this is an exquisite jewel of a poem!!
I love this beautiful piece...
and that last line...DIVINE.
much like the poet who wrote it.
truly lovely in its imagery and emotions.
take care, jm
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3 posted 05-08-2000 12:17 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

*sigh* (doing a lot of that tonight)

This is just too beautiful for words deVine. . . a definite departure for you. . .please come back and visit anytime. . .

Beautiful my friend. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
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serenity blaze
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4 posted 05-08-2000 01:38 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

simple, beautiful, open-heart poem....just enuff said...
Marge Tindal
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5 posted 05-08-2000 02:13 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

PoetdeVine~
Now THIS would be a great e-card or I think you should submit it to the main site and ALSO to the Blue Mountain Arts site.

It is a lovely, lovely poem.
~*Marge*~


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wayoutwalt
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6 posted 05-08-2000 02:15 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

very nice poet d i love it much
Nan
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7 posted 05-08-2000 07:44 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

I like it all, PdV - but especially the second stanza - the "pristine place that hides my soul"... very nice indeed..
angelswing
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8 posted 05-08-2000 07:50 AM       View Profile for angelswing   Email angelswing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angelswing

Very sweet poem - sigh - .  The ' Where angels wings are sighs '. Part is very nice, I have a presence in every poem, a little touch of goodness, piece and sanity . Where an angel touchs only good will come . Thanks very much, it was a great read, that made me tingle .
L.of.L. Tom .


 With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one .
JamesMichael
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9 posted 05-08-2000 08:35 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

"Every day, every moment I live, I live to love just you."  I'll take about $1,000 dollars worth of that devotion...as I ....sigh.....James
Dark Angel
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10 posted 05-08-2000 09:53 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Sharon,this is a truly beautiful piece,especially love these lines .....

Worldly is my everyday name
But my heart holds a passion true
Every day, every moment I live,
I live to love just you.

and I agree with Marge    

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Denise
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11 posted 05-08-2000 01:17 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Lovely indeed, Sharon! Just lovely!!

Denise
Tom26
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12 posted 05-08-2000 01:21 PM       View Profile for Tom26   Email Tom26   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tom26

i think i was there once in a dream.....

         -tom
Michael
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13 posted 05-08-2000 01:24 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Beautiful poem, PdV.  Holds a mystic essance about it. "Worldly is my everyday name" - says it all for me.  


Michael
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14 posted 05-08-2000 01:36 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Good stuff!
lorilockheart
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15 posted 05-08-2000 01:56 PM       View Profile for lorilockheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lorilockheart

The line "A place within this world untouched
Never seen by human eyes", really caught my attention.  Physical places and emotional places. I enjoyed this one.
Lori


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I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance.
song by LeeAnn Womack
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RSEvans
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16 posted 05-08-2000 02:07 PM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSEvans

Sharon,  This is short and beautifully sweet.  Thank you for this.
Kevin Taylor
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17 posted 05-08-2000 02:19 PM       View Profile for Kevin Taylor   Email Kevin Taylor   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Kevin Taylor's Home Page   View IP for Kevin Taylor

I agree with Marge... send it in.

 Kevin

"Poetry is, at once, what you get... and how you got there."

Beki
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18 posted 05-08-2000 04:15 PM       View Profile for Beki   Email Beki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beki

This is beautiful, second stanza my favorite but the last line really brings it full circle. I agree it would be a lovely e-card  
CocoBaci
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19 posted 05-08-2000 04:32 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

"a pristine place that hides my soul where angels wings are sighs"
This PdV is profound and expressed with such elegance.
CocoBaci
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20 posted 05-08-2000 07:03 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Poet deVine,
Wow....wonderful piece.  So soft and sweet!!  Really liked it.  


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Poet deVine
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21 posted 05-08-2000 08:19 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Thank you all kindly for reading and replying to this! I will consider sending it to Blue Mountain...Gosh! I am blown away that you all liked it so much! Thanks guys!!    
hoot_owl_rn
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PDV...this is beautiful, absolutely beautiful.
WhtDove
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23 posted 05-08-2000 11:48 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Awww, you're showing that romantic side ya know? I Love it!!!

The end just grabs your heart
X Angel
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24 posted 05-08-2000 11:52 PM       View Profile for X Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for X Angel

Sharon, it felt almost as if I could have written that poem, I love the way you describe nature and love all together rolled into one beautiful literary package. Exactly my sorta, favorite, wonderful poem!
Kudos
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