Very sweet poem - sigh - . The ' Where angels wings are sighs '. Part is very nice, I have a presence in every poem, a little touch of goodness, piece and sanity . Where an angel touchs only good will come . Thanks very much, it was a great read, that made me tingle . L.of.L. Tom .
With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one .
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
The line "A place within this world untouched Never seen by human eyes", really caught my attention. Physical places and emotional places. I enjoyed this one. Lori
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance. song by LeeAnn Womack ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Tulsa, OK, USA
Sharon, it felt almost as if I could have written that poem, I love the way you describe nature and love all together rolled into one beautiful literary package. Exactly my sorta, favorite, wonderful poem! Kudos ~H