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Just another poem |
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Tom26 Junior Member
since 2000-05-07
Posts 30 |
Praying for the Past My eyes have been open for so long And yet I’ve never really seen Beautiful words to a beautiful song And a melody in between Hope were there was none before Sweet subtleties known only to me Longing for the one I adore Praying that “you” and “I” be “we” |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
tom-- welcome to the passions family...this was a wonderful first post. "Hope were there was none before Sweet subtleties known only to me Longing for the one I adore Praying that “you” and “I” be “we”" This particular stanza was a zinger for my heart. such sweet sentiments you express here..lovely writing m'friend. take care, amy  ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Welcome to Passions, Tom! What a great poem ---- Sweet netswan |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Welcome to passion's. Great poem, short , sweet and to the point. All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tom~ So pleased to welcome you to Passion's. 'JUST' ? ... 'JUST ... Another Poem'? Great entrance to our forums. Hope to read more ... soon. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Short is beautiful as always. I enjoyed this poem. It seemed heartfelt. Welcome to the family. Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Welcome to Passions! 8 beautiful lines. Nice work here, great first post! Regards, sudhir In any moment of decision, The best thing you can do is the right thing, The next-best thing is the wrong thing, And the worst thing you can do is nothing. - Theodore Roosevelt |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Nice work, Welcome . You seem to fit in well here, you are very talented . And have picked the perfect subject . Tom (aswell) . With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one . |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Tom! This is a wonderful poem! I look forward to reading more of your work! Please check your email for a special welcome! Denise |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Wow, Tom, I'm sorry I missed this the first time through. This is exquisite. I loved it. Welcome to Passions, indeed. Michael |
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lorilockheart Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 206Alabama |
Tom, This reminds me of a poem from my childhood. "Me and you, you and me, that's the way it will always be." I hope you can become a "we" very soon. I really enjoyed this. Lori ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance. song by LeeAnn Womack ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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