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mete out
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0 posted 05-07-2000 05:58 PM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for mete out

As we lay side by side
Saying nothing yet expressing everything.
Your angelic face,
Eyes closed,
Lips zipped together.

As we lay side by side
I can feel you heart
echoing its beat against my body.
Your hand moves over to clasp mine,
I tingle at your touch.

As we lay side by side
Your jewel-like eyes open
And your mercyless beauty
Envlopes me

As we lay side by side
I can feel our love growing,

Neverending.

***********************************


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.




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netswan
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1 posted 05-07-2000 06:05 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

This is so touching  - well done,
mete out.

netswan
mete out
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2 posted 05-08-2000 04:55 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

***netswan,
thanks for this.  
it was great to have the motivation and inspiration to be able to write it.


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.


Kit McCallum
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3 posted 05-08-2000 06:26 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

So wonderful are the quiet moments with those who inspire us ... lovely verse mete out ...

/Kit
tracie66
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since 01-18-2000
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4 posted 05-08-2000 06:36 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Ahhh ((sigh)) this was so romantic so tender and just a lovely read. Enjoyed this very much  
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


mete out
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5 posted 05-08-2000 11:09 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

***kit,
thanks for your kindness.
its the best feeling i have ever experienced, being as one with my partner.

***tracie,
your words were lovely, thankyou.


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.


Janet Marie
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6 posted 05-08-2000 11:42 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

*sigh*
mete, this is lovley and tender.
such a gentle moment.
very nice...VERY  
take care, jm


 It's amazing
How you make your face just like a wall
How you take your heart and turn it off
How I turn my head and you lose it all ...
And it's unnerving
How one move just puts me by myself
There you go just trusting someone else
Now I know I put us both through hell ...
I'm not sayin
That there was nothing wrong
I just didn't think you'd ever get tired of me
And I'm not sayin
We ever had the right to hold on
I just didn't wanna let you get away from me.
~MB20~Leave


Enola
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7 posted 05-08-2000 11:54 AM       View Profile for Enola   Email Enola   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enola

You & Ryan are so lucky!  I hope it lasts.  Cheers for the e-mail.
Luv,
Debs.


 The tragedy of it is that nobody sees the look of desperation on my face. Thousands and thousands of us, and we're passing one another without a look of recognition.
Denise
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8 posted 05-08-2000 03:42 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very beautiful thoughts and sentiments in this!  

Denise
LoveBug
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9 posted 05-08-2000 03:45 PM       View Profile for LoveBug   Email LoveBug   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LoveBug

Mete, this is a beautiful poem! I enjoyed it!

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
PericolosoAmore
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10 posted 05-08-2000 03:50 PM       View Profile for PericolosoAmore   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PericolosoAmore

Sound like someones in love.
This Ryan of yours sounds like a wonderful person, Enjoy your love forevermore.
Good people are hard to find these days, you have one of them.
P.A.
Dawn Eclipse
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11 posted 05-08-2000 04:45 PM       View Profile for Dawn Eclipse   Email Dawn Eclipse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dawn Eclipse

Very touching poem.     A great display of the human heart.

 "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying."
Harry Anderson, "Night Court"

*Cassandra Roseen*
infinat3 sadn3ss
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12 posted 05-08-2000 05:25 PM       View Profile for infinat3 sadn3ss   Email infinat3 sadn3ss   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for infinat3 sadn3ss

god dammit , how r so good at this?
mete out
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13 posted 05-09-2000 05:21 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

***janet,
i'm glad you liked it  

***debs,
so do i. its been  7 and a half months, but it feels like forever.even then, its not long enough!  cheers luv..

***denise,
thankyou, it was a joy to write.

***lovebug,
i'm glad you enjoyed it. it just flowed out of me.

***PericolosoAmore,
he is.
i will.
thankyou.

***dawn eclipse,
the only great thing about this pem is the person who inspired it.
thank you for you kind words.

**cabey,
its me that should be asking that question of you.
you're the truely talented one out of us, if we did it that way anyway...
love always.


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.


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