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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
As we lay side by side < !signature-->Saying nothing yet expressing everything. Your angelic face, Eyes closed, Lips zipped together. As we lay side by side I can feel you heart echoing its beat against my body. Your hand moves over to clasp mine, I tingle at your touch. As we lay side by side Your jewel-like eyes open And your mercyless beauty Envlopes me As we lay side by side I can feel our love growing, Neverending. *********************************** I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. [This message has been edited by mete out (edited 05-12-2000).] |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
This is so touching - well done, mete out. netswan |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
***netswan, thanks for this.  it was great to have the motivation and inspiration to be able to write it. I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
So wonderful are the quiet moments with those who inspire us ... lovely verse mete out ... /Kit |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Ahhh ((sigh)) this was so romantic so tender and just a lovely read. Enjoyed this very much  Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
***kit, thanks for your kindness. its the best feeling i have ever experienced, being as one with my partner. ***tracie, your words were lovely, thankyou. I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
*sigh* mete, this is lovley and tender. such a gentle moment. very nice...VERY  take care, jm It's amazing How you make your face just like a wall How you take your heart and turn it off How I turn my head and you lose it all ... And it's unnerving How one move just puts me by myself There you go just trusting someone else Now I know I put us both through hell ... I'm not sayin That there was nothing wrong I just didn't think you'd ever get tired of me And I'm not sayin We ever had the right to hold on I just didn't wanna let you get away from me. ~MB20~Leave |
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Enola Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 138England |
You & Ryan are so lucky! I hope it lasts. Cheers for the e-mail. Luv, Debs. The tragedy of it is that nobody sees the look of desperation on my face. Thousands and thousands of us, and we're passing one another without a look of recognition. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful thoughts and sentiments in this! Denise |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Mete, this is a beautiful poem! I enjoyed it! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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PericolosoAmore Junior Member
since 2000-04-14
Posts 31 |
Sound like someones in love. This Ryan of yours sounds like a wonderful person, Enjoy your love forevermore. Good people are hard to find these days, you have one of them. P.A. |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Very touching poem. A great display of the human heart."Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying." Harry Anderson, "Night Court" *Cassandra Roseen* |
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infinat3 sadn3ss Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 85somerset england |
god dammit , how r so good at this? |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
***janet, i'm glad you liked it ***debs, so do i. its been 7 and a half months, but it feels like forever.even then, its not long enough! cheers luv.. ***denise, thankyou, it was a joy to write. ***lovebug, i'm glad you enjoyed it. it just flowed out of me. ***PericolosoAmore, he is. i will. thankyou. ***dawn eclipse, the only great thing about this pem is the person who inspired it. thank you for you kind words. **cabey, its me that should be asking that question of you. you're the truely talented one out of us, if we did it that way anyway... love always. I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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