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~ Echoes Within The Heart ~

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CocoBaci
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~ Echoes Within The Heart ~

I don't know why I sometimes cry
Whenever I don't have you
Beside me in your arms at night

I don't know how you touched my heart
It just happened all of a sudden
When our eyes and lips discovered each other
That moment in time under twilight sky

I don't know what comes over me
As you tenderly explore my form
Such passionate fires and sensual desires
Just seem to ravage me completely
Like the aftermath of a storm
One just gasps and sighs

I don't know where this attraction will lead
Just knowing one thing is for certain
Today you are the world to me
And tomorrow perhaps my fantasy.


© Copyright 2000 CocoBaci - All Rights Reserved
bboog
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1 posted 05-07-2000 05:23 PM       View Profile for bboog   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit bboog's Home Page   View IP for bboog

Coco~
Nice honest portrait of feelings. Well done.
bboog
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2 posted 05-07-2000 06:02 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Coco, your heart really shows in this one. . . the heart echoes what the mind seeks to know. . . and answers back in sweet tones. . .

Wonderful poem. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

netswan
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Lovely, Coco ------enjoy --)

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CocoBaci
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4 posted 05-07-2000 06:19 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

Your thoughts on this one I write
Means a great deal to me ..
I thank you Swan, Boog and Sven
For taking this moment to enjoy it
CocoBaci  
Irie
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5 posted 05-07-2000 06:36 PM       View Profile for Irie   Email Irie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irie

Oh the Why, How, What and Where's!  
Isn't it amazing the feelings and questions that
whirl around in our minds when we find someone that
awakens our sences and emotions!
I enjoyed this very much!  


lorilockheart
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CocoBaci,
How nice it was to again enjoy your words.  Really beautiful.
Lori


 
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"I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance." song by LeeAnn Womack
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7 posted 05-07-2000 07:17 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

CocoBaci~
This is so tender.
The nicest thing about echoes
is they keep coming back.
Your heartbeat is heard loud and clear
in this piece.
~*Marge*~


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8 posted 05-07-2000 07:35 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

Coco--

From one romantic to another...this was simply lovely! your writing has a beautiful honest style to it. I like it quite a bit!  Me thinks you're pretty great..and this poem was also sensual and sweet at the same time..how u manage that?? lol

take care,
amy  )

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
CocoBaci
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9 posted 05-07-2000 07:40 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

IRIE .. thank you I am happi you liked it

LORI .. you're a sweetie

MARGE .. it's a compliment to me that you stopped by to read this one

AMY .. feelings are likewise towards the poetry you write gurl

Yet if there's one thing I would amend to this it would be ..
~ if only he heard the echoes ~
  CocoBaci
HelmutB
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10 posted 05-10-2000 12:53 PM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

As I promissed you.
I can tell that you are writing with your heart in your hand
Feeling after feeling just around the bend
I love your style, the way your words take shape
Beautiful, and surley love that no one can escape
Well done Coco  

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

JamesMichael
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"It just happened all of a sudden..when our lips and eyes discovered each other."..very lovely.    James
CocoBaci
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HEMLUT
~ I appreciate your comments as it means alot to me that one's inked words transcend thru this screen and enable the reader to grasp one's feelings put in ink.  

JAMES
~ I was elated to see that you passed by this page to take a peak at this lil verse I happened to have wrote thank you for your thoughts.

CocoBaci
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13 posted 05-11-2000 06:33 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

Good poem!!!!!!
REBECCA ALLYN
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14 posted 05-12-2000 05:10 PM       View Profile for REBECCA ALLYN   Email REBECCA ALLYN   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for REBECCA ALLYN

This was awesome!! I keep reading it and reading it!! I really enjoy your work

LOTS of LUV,
Becky
CocoBaci
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Vandana ~ I am pleased you like it
Rebecca ~ Well gurl, its amazing how the wings of the mind have a way of expressing what is captured within the heart
CocoBaci  
Denise
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16 posted 05-12-2000 08:33 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is a beautiful expression, Coco!  

Denise
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