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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Today was a good day Wish they could all be that way Going out and having fun With you in the warmth of the sun Setting our cares aside No rules in which to abide Just the two of us here Has been for many a year Too late to ever go back Can't seem to find the right track We passed the point to return That was the hardest to learn Days like today I feel Something inside that seems real Spending time with you Like no one exists except two There is not a crowd Things will be quiet not loud I know you can be soft and sweet In your arms I've felt the heat A love like ours could create Maybe it's not too late To give this an honest try Before that last shred of love dies Alas that time has come and gone Now we must both move on Release that which can never be Don't look back or you will see The scattered pieces of my broken heart Would need a map to find each part They have all been tossed about I tried to scream and then shout To put an end to my agony Stop the world from turning ebony But it was all to no avail My heart has left a bloody trail Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
A glimpse of what could be if only....good poem!  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneWolf~ Sadly I hear your heart sighs ... From your own depth of feeling - 'Maybe it's not too late To give this an honest try' *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This was a beautiful read with a "twist". As I read, I thought I was going to discover a "happy ending" to follow such positive realizations. Alas ... your closing seemed final and heartwrenching. Are you sure it's truly too late? /Kit [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 05-07-2000).] |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
That was a beautiful insight into a broken heart. Beautiful piece. "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying." Harry Anderson, "Night Court" *Cassandra Roseen* |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Wow, Lone Wolf this is Good! It is hard to let go ---or even sometimes know which fork in the road one must take -- Life sometimes turns out to be an adventure --) Hugs from netswan |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Poet deVine....Thanks and yes, it is just that!!  Marge....Thanks for the hugs, but I think it is already too late for that. Kit...Thanks for the reply. Sorry about that twist...just life I guess. I do believe it is truly too late for any kind of reconcilliation. Very sorry to say that. Dawn....beautiful reply....thanks!! Netswan....the path has been chosen for me, my friend. It is very hard to let go. Thanks for the hugs and kind words!! Catch up with you a little later I hope!! LW |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
WOLFE, so exquisite this one. I must say that letting go as stated above is a difficult journey of the heart yet one was blessed with yesterdays and now will have new tomorrows. CocoBaci |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Lone Wolf, Oh how my heart aches for you. This piece left tears in my eyes. I know that things will get better in time. I hope you realize that as well. Keep writing, that will always help ease the pain. Take care All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
CocoBaci...yes, it is a difficult journey. Thank you for the kind words and for reading!! Jeffrey...Here is a tissue for those tears, my friend. I know things will get better in time. I'll always keep writing to deal with the emotions of life....happy or sad. Thank you!! Lone Wolf Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Just the two of us here Has been for many a year Too late to ever go back Can't seem to find the right track We passed the point to return That was the hardest to learn ------------ Alas that time has come and gone Now we must both move on Release that which can never be Don't look back or you will see The scattered pieces of my broken heart Would need a map to find each part ------------- LW...this is so honest and real and perfect...seems we are traveling the same roads these days... I know...you know....wish we didnt know. the poetry keeps us sane. take care, stay strong jm It's amazing How you make your face just like a wall How you take your heart and turn it off How I turn my head and you lose it all ... And it's unnerving How one move just puts me by myself There you go just trusting someone else Now I know I put us both through hell ... I'm not sayin That there was nothing wrong I just didn't think you'd ever get tired of me And I'm not sayin We ever had the right to hold on I just didn't wanna let you get away from me. ~MB20~Leave |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
JM....so sorry to hear we are traveling the same roads. Would not wish it upon anyone. Yes, we know and I really wish I didn't, but nothing I can do to change it....have tried everything I know. Yes, the poetry keeps us sane...thank God. Thank you for the wonderful reply. I just wrote what was in my battered heart. You take care and stay strong, too. LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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