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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration 
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Patiently when a heart made of stone falls it breaks when a heart encased in iron rushes it falls it breaks when a heart bound in pain is released it rushes it falls it breaks yet if a love is developed over time nurtured patiently- a heart frozen in ice is thawed it melts into the arms of your awaiting dreaming |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
I love the last verse...Though over all it is a magical piece. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Beautiful once again, Christopher...and very good advice that I shall be thinking about...time, I've got... |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
My God, Christopher, you never cease to amaze me with your beautiful words, intriguing thoughts or romantic prose. There are not enough words in the english language to compliment you. I have a few favourite poets here, and it's safe to say that you are now one of them. The last verse is simply perfect and beautiful! I wish you the best and truly hope that you find the woman of your dreams, because you deserve it!  Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Excellent advice indeed, and most assuredly a prize worth the wait ...  This assumes, however, that one has the slightest inkling whatsoever that one's patience is not a vain endeavor ... Sigh ... ever the cynic ... --Me Full fathom five thy father lies, Of his bones are coral made, Those are pearls that were his eyes; Nothing of him that doth fade But doth suffer a sea-change Into something rich and strange... --William Shakespeare, from The Tempest |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Well written, Christopher. I enjoyed this. The ending is cool netswan |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Christopher, this one is great ~ well done! CocoBaci |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Chris, this is a beautiful piece of work, and all you wrote is true. Great job. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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