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Love or Lust?
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Love or Lust? |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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Love or Lust? < !signature-->By: Amy M. Kennedy You set my soul on fire and my heart too So completely lost and captivated by the sweetness of you Two shadows we are, dancing underneath the light of the moon Our time together always escapes too soon Feeling your lips on mine, and the heat of our touch The silence between us says so much Forever I want you to stay, never to depart Not only do you have my body, but my soul and my heart Your smile lights up my world and makes me feel alive and free You make me hope, wish and dream..make me want to believe Hours pass by, and still here we are making love, laughing,and talking, I don't question to ask why Content, I stare into your beautiful eyes as I let out a sigh Making me feel like no one ever has, i close my eyes and pray I wish upon a star, that you aren't a dream and are here to stay But if tomorrow you must leave, I am still thankful for today And this moment in time I shall cherish for all the rest of my days I question whether its love or lust, this feeling that I feel The hot flames of passion between us...that only you can heal Love or lust...your desire drives me crazy, our passion heats the night The flame grows between us, burning hot and radiantly bright Love or lust, that is the question that weights heavily on my mind I suppose time is the only answer...the ultimate sign. ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ [This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 05-07-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
OOOOOHHHHHHHHHHH Im gonna tell... LOL I vote for BOTH...love the lust...  This is SO EXCELLENT AMY-GIRL.. I love seeing this side of you!! and of course you know... I WANT DETAILS!!  LOLGREAT POEM GIRL...TRULY! LATER-AMY-GATOR JAN |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Again, WOW. . . where is all this coming from? Has the spring and the sudden rise in temprature brought itself to Passions? And if so, I like it!!! Amy, this is a terrific poem, really cool to see this side of you. . . hope that you can keep these feelings. . . Great poem!! -------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful words and a lovely verse Amy. The desire and passions felt through your words are powerful. If 'tis lust and not true love ... it is still a wonderful ride! /Kit |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful and romantic...I believe lust and love are so intricately interwoven at times that it is indeed hard to distinquish between the two. When I find someone special I hope it will not be lust without the love...I hope it is love and lust. James |
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lorilockheart Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 206Alabama |
Amy, I agree - there are such blurred lines between love and lust, but it is so very possible to have both. If this poem is reality, may you find that to be true. Lori |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Beautiful Amy thanks for sharing. Love/Lust are very much the same and you are so right -- should it be love -- it will continue to grow - If it is lust ----then with time it dwindles netswan |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Aimster I LUV THIS ONE .. this has a beat that seems to reach out to me. Love or Lust whichever or both .. perhaps with a thread they are woven together as a mutual desire. CocoBaci |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
--Thank you all for your wonderful replies...I don't normally write love poems that much but the inspiration just grabbed me -Jan..as always thanks for your sweet compliments and response, i am loving this side of me too.  -Sven...yes it must be Spring fever or something...the temp. is definitely rising...glad you enjoyed, and i hope i can keep these feelings as well. -Kit...thanks for you lovely reply. and yes this is a wonderful ride...be it love or lust...im just enjoying being happy.  )-James...we share common feelings on the subject of love. I feel this new relationship of mine has room to grow into something very special...just will take time. thanks for your poetic insight. -Lori...yes this is reality. thanks for your lovely thoughts and encouragement. -Netswan, thanks so much for your reply...i really enjoy your work as well. and u are right...only time will tell if its love or lust, i hope its both -Coco...so glad i was able to "reach" out to someone...that is a tremendous compliment, thank you. you guys are the best!~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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