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A fireflies wink

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Seymour Tabin
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         A fireflies wink

Of the theme, I was not certain.  
Shadows danced the light of the moon.
A figure bowed a spread curtain.
The wind played to an ageless tune.

Very aware of my nocturne,
She reached her hand and plucked a rose.
Then pirouette a graceful turn
And tossed it me, in presuppose.

I caught the rose and blew a kiss.
It darted from the heart of me.
She leaped in air, it did not miss.
And thus began the fantasy.

Drawn in gaze I cavort in daze,
I frolicked like an alcoholic.
The polonaise set me ablaze,
The vampire kiss made me colic.

And idiocies ecstasy,
Conceded me a mirage key.

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1 posted 05-07-2000 12:24 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Seymour~
Not one to swoon ... but I could !

'Very aware of my nocturne,
She reached her hand and plucked a rose.
Then pirouette a graceful turn
And tossed it me, in presuppose.'

What the heck ... I think I will !
And in a 'fireflies wink' .... I *swoon*.
You romantic .. you !
I love ya'
~*Marge*~



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Of the theme, I was not certain.  
Shadows danced the light of the moon.
A figure bowed a spread curtain.
The wind played to an ageless tune.

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I caught the rose and blew a kiss.
It darted from the heart of me.
She leaped in air, it did not miss.
And thus began the fantasy.

Drawn in gaze I cavort in daze,
I frolicked like an alcoholic.
The polonaise set me ablaze,
The vampire kiss made me colic.

And idiocies ecstasy,
Conceded me a mirage key.
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This poem is exquisite...
perfect as a fire flies kiss.
so many times I've told you now...
I LOVE WHEN YOU WRITE LIKE THIS!! *SMILE*

THIS IS SO PERFECT SY!!
I enjoyed this one immensely.
take care, jm
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Sy! My how you have progressed here....your work is so good..I love your imagery and use of words in this one....keep them coming!!!
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4 posted 05-07-2000 06:43 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Marge, Thanks for the firefly wink *L*

Janet, Your comments are beautiful *L*

Poet deVine, Praise from you is like money in the poetry bank *L*
 
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