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Serenity's Midnight Plea

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serenity blaze
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0 posted 05-07-2000 05:23 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for serenity blaze

A thousand dreams
I dream, untold
sleep's mystery
to be unfold
clouds in sky
adrift, to skrye...
(Brush you now,
tear from my eye...)
Laughter.
Silence.
Joke subside...

Behind a screen
a heart in scream,
torrent of a hateful flood---
river of this journey's blood.
Lost amid a labyrinth
of my own device...
Tell me now,
where North Star lies.
Take my hand,
though pain despised
and if in truth,
'tis death of youth--
gladly will I dig this grave,
if all my sin will be forgave--
expelled within relief of sigh...

Plaintive, on this bended knee,
tell me, what's to come of me?
© Copyright 2000 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
brian madden
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1 posted 05-07-2000 06:07 AM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

We seem to share similar bedtime rituals. A powerful poem, I am in awe. The are some times when words can't say enough this is one of those times. I chose the icon of a teddy bear, if you feel down before you go to be you can hug him. Sweet dreams.
Janet Marie
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2 posted 05-07-2000 10:06 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

A thousand dreams
I dream, untold
sleep's mystery
to be unfold
clouds in sky
adrift, to skrye...
(Brush you now,
tear from my eye...)
----------------

but my sweet serenity...to dream you must first lie that lovely head of yours down and actually sleep *smile*

this is exquisite my dear...I love when oyu write like this...
love you on bended knee as well  
*kiss kiss* to ya me twin


 It's amazing
How you make your face just like a wall
How you take your heart and turn it off
How I turn my head and you lose it all ...
And it's unnerving
How one move just puts me by myself
There you go just trusting someone else
Now I know I put us both through hell ...
I'm not sayin
That there was nothing wrong
I just didn't think you'd ever get tired of me
And I'm not sayin
We ever had the right to hold on
I just didn't wanna let you get away from me.
~MB20~Leave


spiked
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3 posted 05-11-2000 02:44 AM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

You write with such inspiration.
Another poem well done
thanks
hoot_owl_rn
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Ah, but would we really truly want to know what was going to happen to us?? Perhaps it would be a blessing, but on the other hand, it could very well be a curse. Either way, a nice piece of writing here  
TerryW
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5 posted 05-11-2000 11:56 AM       View Profile for TerryW   Email TerryW   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit TerryW's Home Page   View IP for TerryW

serenity~
     My dear, you brought tears to my eyes.  I will hold your hand through pain dspised, and if I can, I will point you to the north star and its ever-cleansing light.  Very powerful piece.  But when you think on your midnight plea, remember -- you are not alone.


 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.
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6 posted 05-11-2000 11:10 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Look and see the star my friend. . . there will you draw power from its light. . .and light from its power. . .

Excellent poem. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

serenity blaze
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7 posted 05-12-2000 05:53 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Thanks to all for the kind and thoughtful replies---my most sincere gratitude...
poetFemmeFatale
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8 posted 05-12-2000 11:32 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Serenity, this has got to be the most beautiful thing I've seen from you!  I love how your words just "fall" down the page!  This is a wonderful style you've used here....I loved all the rhyme scheme too.  It really gave this the tearful punch it deserves!  Fabulous work my dear, I'm gonna read it again!  Sad, but beautiful!  (sniff and grin)
Denise
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9 posted 05-12-2000 11:39 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is wonderfully written, Serenity, I agree!

Denise
 
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