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On The Monotony Of Familiar Lovers

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serenity blaze
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0 posted 05-07-2000 02:45 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for serenity blaze

Animal instinct
passion and lust
groping hands
pelvic thrust...
Kiss the neck,
stroke the thigh,
listen
to your lover sigh...
Passion flared,
desire breeds,
Pacify
the body's needs.
Kiss and tell.
Love and sell.
Lover's love,
become your hell...

So what if the game grows old?
just close your eyes, release your soul,
and screw until your blood runs cold...

Nothing to it.
Sleep right through it.
© Copyright 2000 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
netswan
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1 posted 05-07-2000 02:49 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Ouch Serenity ------ a good lover
one could never sleep through  NO Matter
how unnew it is ---)

netswan
brian madden
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2 posted 05-07-2000 06:42 AM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

The only way to describe the change of direction in this poem is lying out a summer's day and having a litre of artic water be suddenly poured all over you. Sex without love is indeed pointless and worthless. Great poem, I loved the pacing.  
pandora
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3 posted 05-07-2000 10:18 AM       View Profile for pandora   Email pandora   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pandora

LOL!!!!!!!!!

i love this...!!!!!

Janet Marie
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4 posted 05-07-2000 10:38 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

DAMN!!!
well, get me all hot and bothered and then kick me out of bed *smile*
this is awesome girl...
those last two lines...
perfection.

glad I didnt read this late last night...
dont think I would have slept  
later sweet poet-girl.
jm

 It's amazing
How you make your face just like a wall
How you take your heart and turn it off
How I turn my head and you lose it all ...
And it's unnerving
How one move just puts me by myself
There you go just trusting someone else
Now I know I put us both through hell ...
I'm not sayin
That there was nothing wrong
I just didn't think you'd ever get tired of me
And I'm not sayin
We ever had the right to hold on
I just didn't wanna let you get away from me.
~MB20~Leave


Sven
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5 posted 05-07-2000 11:52 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

serenity, I can feel the sting of this one. . . quite pointed. . .

full of power. . .excellent poem. . .

-----------------------------------------------------------

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Michael
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6 posted 05-07-2000 11:57 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

I loved this one, dear...
Gads - that last line almost hurts to think about...LOL

Michael

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7 posted 05-08-2000 12:12 AM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

Sheesh!  Haven't these people ever heard of CREATIVITY...?  LOL

Methinks at this point, another lover is in order ... as I don't think it would be possible for it to become "hell" with someone you actually cared for ... one would hope that in that case the lack would have been noticed, and steps taken to correct the problem ... but then maybe that's just me...?  

Not sure whether to giggle or cluck my tongue and shake my head, here, girl ... let's hope this isn't autobiographical!  (If it is, see advice above -- LOL)  

--Kess


 Full fathom five thy father lies,
Of his bones are coral made,
Those are pearls that were his eyes;
Nothing of him that doth fade
But doth suffer a sea-change
Into something rich and strange...


--William Shakespeare, from The Tempest

serenity blaze
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8 posted 05-08-2000 12:32 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

netswan---do 20 years and call me in the
          morning....smiles...

brian-----and yes, that is EXACTLY how it
          feels...

pandora---(grinning now)  the irony of
          PANDORA replying to THIS--LOVE IT.

j. marie--I think I know you know, y'know?

Sven------Thanx Sveetie--tho I am convinced
          that you couldn't possibly relate.

Michael---Aren't you glad I didn't blame
          THIS one on you?  ROFLMAO..AHHAHA.

kess------methinks everyone here has heard
          of creativity---was someone else I
          had in doubt---but thanks, and
          worry not, I exit smiling...

Thanks to all...glad that no one was offended
(well, WITH THE EXCEPTION OF ONE...AHHAHA...
 
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