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An Angel Lie Beside Me

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JD
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0 posted 05-06-2000 11:28 PM       View Profile for JD   Email JD   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JD

To night I feel a presence
One which I can not see
One which I can not hear
But I can feel her
Even though shes still alive
I feel her with me
I do not know why
I feel at ease
I feel as if I am safe tonight
Safe from all harm
I can feel her arms around me telling me
Don't be afraid
Don't be afraid to show her how you feel
You know what you must say
Say you hope she never gose away
That she will stay

Tonight an angel lay beside me







This poem is for all whom is afraid to say how they feel for fear of loseing someone close to them.

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pandora
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1 posted 05-06-2000 11:47 PM       View Profile for pandora   Email pandora   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pandora

very mellow, fluid... romantic...
enjoyed this, thanks

pan
Poet deVine
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2 posted 05-07-2000 12:21 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Lovely sir! It is comforting to have that kind of protection...
netswan
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3 posted 05-07-2000 01:40 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Lovely poem, lovely tribute.  I haven't
realized that people are afraid to say
"I love you."   Guess I learn something
new every day.

Thanks
netswan
serenity blaze
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4 posted 05-07-2000 04:04 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

So simple and lovely---spoke to my heart--
just as good poetry is supposed to do...
write more, post often...and thank you.
JamesMichael
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5 posted 05-07-2000 07:55 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

I am struggling with those fears...I have come a long way.  I was able to tell my friend Lena that she is the most beautiful woman in Hawaii....and then tell her all the things I like about her.   James
Aimster
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6 posted 05-07-2000 12:07 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

This was so pretty hon. I really liked the theme and meaning behind this. i have never read your work before, but am glad i read this piece. you have a talent my friend...and the "angel beside you" is one lucky gal. best wishes and take care.

Amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
JD
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7 posted 05-08-2000 07:01 AM       View Profile for JD   Email JD   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JD

Thank you all for reading my poem.


JD


 Everything Dies


angelswing
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8 posted 05-08-2000 07:45 AM       View Profile for angelswing   Email angelswing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angelswing

Only the body dies, the soul lives on in the hearts of friends . A great poem very touching and remorsfuly written, remember when you lose someone close to you as long as you still think of them they will always live on .
L.of.L. Tom .


 With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one .
Tuck
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9 posted 05-08-2000 08:24 AM       View Profile for Tuck   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tuck

what a touching poem...i am struggling with such a fear....it is a hard thing to deal with, but i think he knows anyway...may poetry always be there to be written...for our sake  
Danielle
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10 posted 06-28-2001 02:00 PM       View Profile for Danielle   Email Danielle   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Danielle's Home Page   View IP for Danielle

Wow Justin, I had forgotten how good you can write. You're alot better then me, I love the way you worded this piece. I think it's awesome. I noticed you haven't posted in a very long time...maybe you should put some new stuff up, I'd love to read more of your work.

Blessed Be Those Who
Reads My Writing

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