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Tia
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0 posted 05-06-2000 11:12 PM       View Profile for Tia   Email Tia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tia

Unforgiven , in a world of lies
Promises broken, loosened ties
One little lie, we drifted apart
Unsolved problems, broken hearts
Unspoken words, meant to be said
We're all living, meant to be dead
Unanswered prayers, meant to be real
Cold hearted touches, that I had to feel
Precious smiles, so full of hate
Another child killed, a minute of fate
Questions asked, no answers remain
Broken hearts of emotional pain.....


 I'd rather have someone hate me for who i am,than to have someone like me for who i'm pretending to be
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pandora
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1 posted 05-07-2000 12:26 AM       View Profile for pandora   Email pandora   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pandora

Powerful poetry... awesome!!! intense and fine!! thank you for the read
-pan
netswan
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2 posted 05-07-2000 01:36 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Wow Tia this is dynamite.

netswan
tracie66
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3 posted 05-07-2000 01:59 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Tia~
Very powerful and intense read, even so I enjoyed reading this very much  
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


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State of constant confusion!


4 posted 05-07-2000 02:04 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Such deep emotion in this one

I love it

All my love,
Jeffrey

 I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep
Aimster
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5 posted 05-07-2000 02:38 AM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

~this was so heartfelt and deep. intense emotions screamed thru each words. great work u have here. take care.

amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
Tia
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6 posted 05-07-2000 06:50 PM       View Profile for Tia   Email Tia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tia

Thank you everyone for your compliments on my writing....bye for now

Tia

 I'd rather have someone hate me for who i am,than to have someone like me for who i'm pretending to be
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