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~3 am Ache~

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Janet Marie
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0 posted 05-06-2000 10:26 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Janet Marie

~3 am Ache~

The crisp night air licks my skin ...
even it cant cool this ache with in.
I can feel you here in the midnight air,
mouth on mine, fingers tangled in my hair.

The dark of night sky cant contain this desire,
consumed by this need, your touch is all I require.
Under star lit heavens and moon swept sky ...
I dream of the moment that next to you, I might lie.

Star light, star bright ... might I have this wish tonight ...
to feel his body beside mine ... holding me tight.
Kisses so hard that it leaves him weak ...
caresses that share the pleasures we both seek.

A desire so strong ... the moon would fade in the afterglow ...
a need so intense ... until satisfied ... it can only grow.
Night brings in this ache so deep, it takes my breath away,
Somehow, some way ... I am going to make this fantasy see light of day.

Janet Marie


saturday night spice ...
by request.*smile*


© Copyright 2000 Janet Marie - All Rights Reserved
bobbycat
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1 posted 05-06-2000 10:32 PM       View Profile for bobbycat   Email bobbycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bobbycat

WOW---that was amazing!! You painted such a clear picture with your words.  Excellent poem!  *leaves to go turn on a fan....*    

Bobbycat =^..^=
Butterflies_dont_cry
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2 posted 05-06-2000 10:38 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

Not only was this a Spicy Hot fantasy   but the ending was perfectly wonderful!! Somehow, some way ... I am going to make this fantasy see light of day You have the gift S.S.  Thank you for sharing!  

 Hold me for yesterday
Kiss me for tomorrow
But love me for today.

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 05-06-2000 10:56 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

JanetMarie~
Saturday Night Spice ... LOL !
Yep .... success is what it is !
You silly girl ... this is funtastic !
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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serenity blaze
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4 posted 05-06-2000 10:56 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Love yer cookin'--and that's from A Crazy Cajun--certified....

My goodness Janet Marie----I have started a new regimen of lip "push-ups"--just so I can meet you half way!  GIGANTIC HUG from me to you,,,filled with love and wishes for wishes come true...
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5 posted 05-06-2000 10:57 PM       View Profile for pen of passion   Email pen of passion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pen of passion

Hot poem.  Need some Evian in here.
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6 posted 05-06-2000 11:09 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Janet, Janet, Janet. . .

Have you been reading my mind?     And if you have, STOP IT!!  lol

This is a really hot one. . .so different for you. . .I like it!!  I can see that you know what you want and that nothing's going to stop you. . . all I can say is. . .

GO FOR IT GIRL!!!!  YOU ONLY LIVE ONCE!!!!!

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

lorilockheart
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7 posted 05-06-2000 11:22 PM       View Profile for lorilockheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lorilockheart

Jan,

This is really intense.  You're right - I guess we're never really contented. Your words could have come straight from my own heart.  We may be on the same wavelength.  
I'm going to go now and read all your others.

Lori
tracie66
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8 posted 05-07-2000 01:09 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

sweet Janet~
I hate to think what inspired this...LoL actually I was thinking what may have inspired this   Go girl, be happy, this is fantastic and quite HOT.
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


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9 posted 05-07-2000 01:54 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Oh Jan,

So, So HOT

May I be the first to say congratulations on a wonderful piece of writing. I had to print this for my scrapbook.

All my love,
Jeffrey

 I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep
netswan
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10 posted 05-07-2000 02:00 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Whoa girl -----lol stop dreaming
and find those arms  --)
Wonderful poem


netswan
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11 posted 05-07-2000 02:34 AM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

Jan
Lawdy girl...my AC is broke and then u go and post a poem like this...yowsers! your many diverse talents as a poet shine thru on this one. i loved it!! thanks for posting this one...red hot flames and all!

amy  
p.s. you go girl! ^5!

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
Janet Marie
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12 posted 05-07-2000 11:52 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

LOL...glad you all enjoyed...
Saturday nites are for spice..right?
*smile*

bobbycat...TY for the WOW...LOL  

Butterfly..NO FAIR..you get to play with
the graphics...glad you enjoyed...sometimes ya just gotta go with the flow

margie-girl...LOL..yes Sat. spice is funtastic...thanks for the smiles!!

serenity LOL at you...yes you are CAJUN SPICE!!
and as for that lip regimen...bring em on my sweet...love those lips *kiss kiss*

pen passion...thank you for the read...I'll buy ya  around of Evian LOL

Sven...ya know what they say...small and romantic minds think a like.
thanks my friend.

Lori...thank you for the"intense" that was what i was feeling...
and I am MOST complimented that you wish to read more...
be warned my poetic kindered....
you'll need tylenol when your done *smile*

tracie...thank you..sometimes  we just gotta go with the heat...your sweet too

Jeff, TY my poetic pal...
most honored to be in your scrap book  

Swan.. Im trying my dear IM TRYING LOL

Amy-girl...NO AC?  big drag...
but Im always glad to heat things up...
call it crazy from the heat. LOL

THANKS ALL...
love ya, jm



[This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 05-07-2000).]
WhiteNite
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13 posted 05-08-2000 12:05 AM       View Profile for WhiteNite   Email WhiteNite   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhiteNite's Home Page   View IP for WhiteNite

Lovely poetry by a lovely poet.  

I think I'm suffering from the "24th year Ache"  

 "Don't let your character get camoflaged with your environment.
Find who you are and let it stay in its true colors." --Rachel Joy Scott


poetFemmeFatale
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14 posted 05-08-2000 01:03 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Lemme guess...this ache comes from lying next to that deadhead...?  Er...did I just say that?  Ohmygosh, how I'm losing my ettiquette at this late hour!  ROFLMAO  Never had any!!!  Oooops!

*sigh*   Girl, I have ached many a night like this, but let me tell you, this was one sensually sweet poem.  HOT, but sincerely honest, and sweet.  What is it about girls like us?  So much passion, and no one deserving to smear it on?  LOL     j/k
baerlon
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15 posted 05-08-2000 01:54 AM       View Profile for baerlon   Email baerlon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit baerlon's Home Page   View IP for baerlon

Hey I was wondering where you went.  I enjoy reading your peoms alot, you paint a picture with everyone, and that is what i look for in a poem.  I hope you keep writing although i for the most part stopped unless i am really ticked.  Yet i still like to read them and yours are very well done.

later

 There's a peace inside us all
Let it be your friend
It will help you carry on
In the end
There's a peace inside us all
-Creed
amazon_lover
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16 posted 05-09-2000 05:14 PM       View Profile for amazon_lover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amazon_lover

Hi!
Thats a beautiful description of human desires.  A need for the bodies to feel eachother's warmth and a need to be felt. I yearn for the day when I'll be with my love and let the passion sore thigh and the desires to be quenched.
Sincerely
A_L
Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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17 posted 05-09-2000 05:34 PM       View Profile for Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Email Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rosemary J. Gwaltney's Home Page   View IP for Rosemary J. Gwaltney

I love this!  I was just in the middle of writing one about the same subject.  When my husband called my attention to yours, not even knowing what I was writing yet, I changed mine to four A.M., so you wouldn't think I was copying you.  But our minds have obviously had a time of going in the same direction! Beautiful poem.

hoot_owl_rn
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18 posted 05-09-2000 05:59 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Whew Girl, this one is H...O...T!!!! Kinda makes me real hungry for oatmeal  
 
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