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~3 am Ache~
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~3 am Ache~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
~3 am Ache~ The crisp night air licks my skin ... even it cant cool this ache with in. I can feel you here in the midnight air, mouth on mine, fingers tangled in my hair. The dark of night sky cant contain this desire, consumed by this need, your touch is all I require. Under star lit heavens and moon swept sky ... I dream of the moment that next to you, I might lie. Star light, star bright ... might I have this wish tonight ... to feel his body beside mine ... holding me tight. Kisses so hard that it leaves him weak ... caresses that share the pleasures we both seek. A desire so strong ... the moon would fade in the afterglow ... a need so intense ... until satisfied ... it can only grow. Night brings in this ache so deep, it takes my breath away, Somehow, some way ... I am going to make this fantasy see light of day. Janet Marie saturday night spice ... by request.*smile* |
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bobbycat Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 233USA |
WOW---that was amazing!! You painted such a clear picture with your words. Excellent poem! *leaves to go turn on a fan....*  Bobbycat =^..^= |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 Not only was this a Spicy Hot fantasy  but the ending was perfectly wonderful!! Somehow, some way ... I am going to make this fantasy see light of day You have the gift S.S. Thank you for sharing! Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JanetMarie~ Saturday Night Spice ... LOL ! Yep .... success is what it is ! You silly girl ... this is funtastic ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Love yer cookin'--and that's from A Crazy Cajun--certified.... My goodness Janet Marie----I have started a new regimen of lip "push-ups"--just so I can meet you half way! GIGANTIC HUG from me to you,,,filled with love and wishes for wishes come true... |
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pen of passion Member
since 1999-08-11
Posts 234 |
Hot poem. Need some Evian in here. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Janet, Janet, Janet. . . Have you been reading my mind? And if you have, STOP IT!! lolThis is a really hot one. . .so different for you. . .I like it!! I can see that you know what you want and that nothing's going to stop you. . . all I can say is. . . GO FOR IT GIRL!!!! YOU ONLY LIVE ONCE!!!!! ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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lorilockheart Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 206Alabama |
Jan, This is really intense. You're right - I guess we're never really contented. Your words could have come straight from my own heart. We may be on the same wavelength. I'm going to go now and read all your others. Lori |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
sweet Janet~ I hate to think what inspired this...LoL actually I was thinking what may have inspired this Go girl, be happy, this is fantastic and quite HOT.Tracie~  Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Oh Jan, So, So HOT May I be the first to say congratulations on a wonderful piece of writing. I had to print this for my scrapbook. All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Whoa girl -----lol stop dreaming and find those arms --) Wonderful poem netswan |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Jan Lawdy girl...my AC is broke and then u go and post a poem like this...yowsers! your many diverse talents as a poet shine thru on this one. i loved it!! thanks for posting this one...red hot flames and all! amy p.s. you go girl! ^5! ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
LOL...glad you all enjoyed... Saturday nites are for spice..right? *smile* bobbycat...TY for the WOW...LOL Butterfly..NO FAIR..you get to play with the graphics...glad you enjoyed...sometimes ya just gotta go with the flow margie-girl...LOL..yes Sat. spice is funtastic...thanks for the smiles!! serenity LOL at you...yes you are CAJUN SPICE!! and as for that lip regimen...bring em on my sweet...love those lips *kiss kiss* pen passion...thank you for the read...I'll buy ya around of Evian LOL Sven...ya know what they say...small and romantic minds think a like. thanks my friend. Lori...thank you for the"intense" that was what i was feeling... and I am MOST complimented that you wish to read more... be warned my poetic kindered.... you'll need tylenol when your done *smile* tracie...thank you..sometimes we just gotta go with the heat...your sweet too Jeff, TY my poetic pal... most honored to be in your scrap book Swan.. Im trying my dear IM TRYING LOL Amy-girl...NO AC? big drag... but Im always glad to heat things up... call it crazy from the heat. LOL THANKS ALL... love ya, jm [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 05-07-2000).] |
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WhiteNite Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 241Montgomery, AL |
Lovely poetry by a lovely poet. I think I'm suffering from the "24th year Ache" "Don't let your character get camoflaged with your environment. Find who you are and let it stay in its true colors." --Rachel Joy Scott |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Lemme guess...this ache comes from lying next to that deadhead...? Er...did I just say that? Ohmygosh, how I'm losing my ettiquette at this late hour! ROFLMAO Never had any!!! Oooops! *sigh* Girl, I have ached many a night like this, but let me tell you, this was one sensually sweet poem. HOT, but sincerely honest, and sweet. What is it about girls like us? So much passion, and no one deserving to smear it on? LOL j/k |
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baerlon Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 197Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA |
Hey I was wondering where you went. I enjoy reading your peoms alot, you paint a picture with everyone, and that is what i look for in a poem. I hope you keep writing although i for the most part stopped unless i am really ticked. Yet i still like to read them and yours are very well done. later There's a peace inside us all Let it be your friend It will help you carry on In the end There's a peace inside us all -Creed |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi! Thats a beautiful description of human desires. A need for the bodies to feel eachother's warmth and a need to be felt. I yearn for the day when I'll be with my love and let the passion sore thigh and the desires to be quenched. Sincerely A_L |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
I love this! I was just in the middle of writing one about the same subject. When my husband called my attention to yours, not even knowing what I was writing yet, I changed mine to four A.M., so you wouldn't think I was copying you. But our minds have obviously had a time of going in the same direction! Beautiful poem. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Whew Girl, this one is H...O...T!!!! Kinda makes me real hungry for oatmeal |
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