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You Were Made For No One.

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Jone
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0 posted 05-06-2000 10:12 PM       View Profile for Jone   Email Jone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jone

Life is a perpetual land,
Of hate, and sadness.
Life exists,
To make you hate.

You live to love,
but you are a fool.
For there is nothing in this world,
That's meant for you.

You are made,
To be alone.
You exist,
For misery alone.

You are here,
For others to use.
You cannot see,
Because you are abused.

You are not hit,
and you are not bruised.
But you are scared,
Where you shall never heal.

They make you weak,
Day in and out.
They make you sad,
Because you are without.

They are many,
You are one.
They have each other,
You have no one.

There is no point,
In trying again.
For it is pointless,
and useless.
You should just die.
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Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 03-06-2000
Posts 3768
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1 posted 05-06-2000 10:47 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry


Jone* This is very powerful and sad.  But in reading I feel a deep understanding and familiar surroundings  

They are many,
You are one.
They have each other,
You have no one.


This stanza........was the story of my life.
If you ever need someone to listen....my e-mail and ICQ # are listed.  
The writing exquisite, the pain showing through every line.  A very powerful piece.


 Hold me for yesterday
Kiss me for tomorrow
But love me for today.

Kellsue
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Posts 221
Waukesha, WI USA


2 posted 05-06-2000 10:50 PM       View Profile for Kellsue   Email Kellsue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kellsue

There is a lot of hurt expressed in this poem.  You did a very good job of expressing the hurtful and hopeless feelings.

~Kelly


 Reflect upon your present blessings-of which every man has many-not on your past misfortunes, of which all men have some. ~Charles Dickens

We make a living by what we get, but we make a life by what we give. ~Winston Churchill
Dawn Eclipse
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since 01-31-2000
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3 posted 05-06-2000 11:10 PM       View Profile for Dawn Eclipse   Email Dawn Eclipse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dawn Eclipse

Jone~~

That was a very good, but depressing piece.  I've visited that lonely place, but I do know that it does get better.  Hope you feel better.



 "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying."
Harry Anderson, "Night Court"

*Cassandra Roseen*
Twilight Tearstains
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4 posted 05-07-2000 12:43 AM       View Profile for Twilight Tearstains   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Twilight Tearstains

So painful and heartwrenching.  I too have felt like this many times.  Exellent work!  

 ~We are only truly lost when we've lost ourselves~
netswan
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5 posted 05-07-2000 02:07 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Powerful Jone -- such anquish and anger.
I hope all is well -- if not, please email
me --
We have all had those horrid lonely feelings,
and somehow someway we make it through.
If it is just from your imagination.
Darn good job!

netswan
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6 posted 05-07-2000 02:09 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

No doubt....I'm with netswan on this one.

Darn good job

All my love,
Jeffrey

 I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep
 
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