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My every desire, need, love

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galaxy84
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since 04-24-2000
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Pa, USA


0 posted 05-06-2000 08:35 PM       View Profile for galaxy84   Email galaxy84   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for galaxy84

Perfect?

Can he be?

Butterflies when he's near.

No words from my mouth.

Speech; none have I.

My heart races.

My mind restless.

Only thoughts of him.

He's perfect.

My desire.

My need.

My love.

I have searched

For him

Years gone by

With no luck

In finding him

Then he came

In my life

All I desire

All I need

All I love

Perfect




 "Comes the blind Fury with th' abhorred shears,
And slits the thin-spun life."
-Milton
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netswan
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since 03-28-2000
Posts 1395
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1 posted 05-06-2000 08:51 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Wow galaxy,  Lucky You --)

netswan
galaxy84
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2 posted 05-06-2000 09:02 PM       View Profile for galaxy84   Email galaxy84   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for galaxy84

thanks netswan. i think im in love. he's great.

 "Comes the blind Fury with th' abhorred shears,
And slits the thin-spun life."
-Milton
CocoBaci
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3 posted 05-06-2000 10:00 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

Such sweetness your poetry
True love has only one form in life
.. pure and kind ..

This is indeed enjoyable reading
CocoBaci
lorilockheart
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since 05-06-2000
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4 posted 05-07-2000 11:40 AM       View Profile for lorilockheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lorilockheart

How inspiring love can be!

You are lucky.

I enjoyed this.
Lori
Aimster
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since 02-19-2000
Posts 4367
Charlotte, NC


5 posted 05-07-2000 11:52 AM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

I really enjoyed reading this one quite a bit! excellent in form and presentation. you and the subject you speak of sound like you share a rare kind of love. Enjoy it! take care,
amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
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