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Fantasy in the Night

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CocoBaci
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0 posted 05-06-2000 05:46 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for CocoBaci

~ Fantasy In The Night ~

Lost and found I am in browneyes
As fiery passions burns inside
My soul whispering as I lay in his arms
With him beside me is where I belong.

He leans towards me stroking my mane
The warmth of his body sends a shiver thru my veins
He comforts yet teases as I bend at my knees
What he does to my essence means nothing to me
For it is his love that I seek and I need.

I thrive each passing day
To have him caress me in his ways
His touch upon my thighs
His breath upon my breasts
His lips upon my lips
Seem to bring me to a passionate bliss.

I search for words to describe
The feelings I get when he enters inside
My soul and heart cannot contain
The flames of passion that only he can tame.

The only sounds that can be heard
Are the fainted echoes of pleasing sighs
Sharing a fantasy in the night.
CocoBaci




 



[This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 05-08-2000).]
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brian madden
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1 posted 05-06-2000 07:52 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

Yes that was hot, Love is a powerful thing
when it is genuine. I loved the natural flow of your poem, the images great stuff. it certainly got my blood running.  
Janet Marie
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2 posted 05-06-2000 10:13 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

*SIGH*
oh yea...big ole *sigh*...
you write most passionately my dear...
very nice...hope its not too hot
take care, jm
Sven
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3 posted 05-06-2000 11:30 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Ok, I want to know what's gotten into everybody around here. . . what's with all of these passionate longing poems?

CocoBaci, this is just too excellent. . . you have done very well with this one. . .

Wonderful. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

jwesley
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4 posted 05-06-2000 11:43 PM       View Profile for jwesley   Email jwesley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jwesley

Yep, yep, yep...my wife's looking over my shoulder so all I can  say is ...yep, yep, yep!! But "thoughts" are wonderful.

j.

pandora
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5 posted 05-06-2000 11:45 PM       View Profile for pandora   Email pandora   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pandora

ah yes!!! this is a sweet ballad of love... very fine... thank you for sharing!
CocoBaci
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6 posted 05-06-2000 11:52 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

Janet, Pandora, Swan,Brian, Sven, and Wesley
I am thrilled that somehow this passion I write has reached out to you tonite.  Thank you for your kind comments and thoughts as  your feedback can only inspire one
~ To feel ~ To write ~ To explore ~
CocoBaci




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netswan
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7 posted 05-07-2000 01:28 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Hi Coco -- I read this one when you first
posted  -- It was very passionate,and
was wondering if it would be allowed in
the open forum.

So don't see that it wasn't censored,
so let me just say -- this is a beautiful
piece

netswan
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