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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland 
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Hibernation Concrete placement, shudder against the wide. Collapse slowly inside crawl through to the shelter of a private womb. Abandon all sensation, It seems perfect to pretend that there is nothing beyond me. I need this for sanity in minute stature eclipsed by humanity. A subdued restlessness a frantic paralyse, a still eye a closed mouth. Turn forever to the other side, secure in bondage shell; nest of hibernation. |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
WOW!!! Now that's what I call making an entrence. Welcome to passion's. I'm definitely looking forward to reading more of your work. Great first post. All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
thanks Jeffery, I am glad to be here. I look forwaerd to reading on all great poems on this site. The poroblem is that there are so many I may have to hibernate just so I can read most of them. Brian. |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Welcome to Passions, Brian! What a great poem --- Thanks for sharing. Welcome to the Family, and yes just tons of tons of poems, wish I could get to them all. netswan |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BrianM~ Welcome to our Passion's family. I greatly enjoyed your first post. 'Collapse slowly inside crawl through to the shelter of a private womb. Great thought ! The 'polar bear' in me loves hibernation. I call it my Vision Quest ... snug in my cave I write from the heart, awakening thoughts that hibernate within me. Enjoy your stay. You're gonna like it here. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Brian, You cannot even imagine the delight to see your name on this forum, and your poem is awesome, wow, wow again great first post I can't wait to see more. WELCOME TO PASSIONS Love, Cerenity |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
That was splendid! I enjoyed it very much Brian!  Welcome! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
~ Brian~ This one you write is truly one of a kind Makes one think of dreams in the nite When the wings of our mind And the echoes from our heart Open doorways to find Peacefulness and an excitement so sublime. This was indeed a great reading for me! CocoBaci |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Brian! Great poem! I've always wished we could hibernate like some of the animals do. Something just seems so restful and peaceful about it. Please check your e-mail for a special welcome! Denise |
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