How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Archives
 Open Poetry #7 Archive
 This may not be a Sonnet
 1 2 3 4 5 6 7
Follow us on Facebook

 This is an Archive. You may post a reply, but new topics are not allowed.

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

This may not be a Sonnet ( But what the heck I'm already confused !)

 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
Dr.Moose1
Member Elite
since 09-05-99
Posts 3505
Bewilderment , USA


0 posted 05-06-2000 03:41 PM       View Profile for Dr.Moose1   Email Dr.Moose1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dr.Moose1

Un-aware of all the forms
I sometimes vary from the norm
In trying hard to get it right
the words I use are often trite

Forgive a lapse of memory
if hard to follow I may be
It could be worse I'll say in verse
I could be you then you'd be me

But that is Justin Sanity
Instead of two we now have three
And there-in lies the crux my friend
it's why they say I'm 'round the bend

When one and one add up to three
It's hard to tell which one is me !


© Copyright 2000 William E.Kleist - All Rights Reserved
netswan
Senior Member
since 03-28-2000
Posts 1395
Washington


1 posted 05-06-2000 05:32 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

LOL Doc. Bet, you had fun writing this.
but don't ask me what a sonnet is --
think it all written in ten syllables.
songs I try to write in 6 syllables or 8
or 7 or nine   -- and ditites maybe four
See I am just as confused as you are ---)

netswan
Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 05-20-99
Posts 24426
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA


2 posted 05-06-2000 08:01 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

LOL...Sonnet?? Where's a sonnet??
This is cute, Moose...



Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 08-22-99
Posts 23002


3 posted 05-06-2000 08:28 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Though not a sonnet this is great
As per the norm for Dr. Moose
So please post more, don't make me wait
Just set that poet spirit loose!  

Denise
Dr.Moose1
Member Elite
since 09-05-99
Posts 3505
Bewilderment , USA


4 posted 05-09-2000 07:30 PM       View Profile for Dr.Moose1   Email Dr.Moose1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dr.Moose1

netswan , d , nan ,
Many thanks I stand corrected ( on all four of course )would you expect any less , after all I'm not a horse .
Doc
LoveBug
Deputy Moderator 5 Tours
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 01-08-2000
Posts 5015


5 posted 05-09-2000 08:31 PM       View Profile for LoveBug   Email LoveBug   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LoveBug

Sonnets are easier to read than to write!   And I enjoyed reading yours!

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
Meadowmuse
Member Elite
since 12-27-1999
Posts 3317


6 posted 05-09-2000 08:48 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

If indeed you're 'round the bend
it matters not to me, my friend
for I'll enjoy your clever sonnet
as much as if't had Shakespeare on it

but then I scarce could comprehend
a sonnet for I've never penned (one)



~ Claire

 Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


David2
Member
since 03-22-2000
Posts 412


7 posted 05-09-2000 08:58 PM       View Profile for David2   Email David2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for David2

I don't think this is a sonnet but it sure was funny!
        David2
 
 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Archives >> Open Poetry #7 >> This may not be a Sonnet Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors