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amazon_lover
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland

0 posted 2000-05-06 03:27 PM



Life with all its awe and splendour
I'm left all alone to wonder
I feel I don't head towards a destination
I feel I'm not the only one facing this confrontation
I like to be sure of things which I'm not
I'll carry on saying everything has its timeslot
Life can hold much more imagination than the dream
For all the souls to be bathed everyday afresh in sun-beam

I'm not looking forward to the future
Nor I look into my unsavoury past
I'll look today with all glee
I'll face the things I can't flee
But I'm dazed with this ethereal feeling
As it had become a part of my being
So I'll never be sober again, for love will never perish
I'm sure we have good memmories to chersih
Eventhough our destiny leads us to different paths
I'll hold our love,my friend,at the top of memory charts

We'll lead us to find our way
We'll not let our hearts sway
I'm not sure of the future's hold
I promise that you'll always have what you told
For I remember the day when I first kissed
It was a feeling that I haven't felt at all
I wish we could make love at all times
But,I cannot predict when the bell chimes

Its the feel of our love I cherish everyday
Sometimes it keeps me at the bay
But nay I seek another love
For you're my dove which I'll always love
I'm not sure how I'm going to spend the lonely nights
I'll say bye for now 'til I meet you

I've just said 'I love you'

sincerely
A_L



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lorilockheart
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 206
Alabama
1 posted 2000-05-06 05:34 PM


Just wanted to let you know you're not the only one "facing this confrontation."  Oh, if we could just see the future.  It is hard not knowing.  Thanks for a poem that is so easy to relate to.

Lori

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
2 posted 2000-05-07 07:23 PM


Hi amazon_lover,

Much feeling poured out in this, very beautifully done my friend, enjoyed this.

Cerenity

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