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Rushing Down The Mountain |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Rushing Down The Mountain ~*Marge Tindal*~ Love comes rushing down the mountain through the forest and the hills Flowing in the babbling brooks puddling in the smallest rill Cascading to the streams carrying me with the flow Winding through the rivers on it's way to the ocean it goes Love walks with me through the valley helps me climb so I might stand Once more upon the mountaintop cradled within a loving hand Love comes rushing down the mountain as the breeze that sweeps the plain Caresses me with spirit's wing so I can fly again Love meets me on the morning as the dawning sky takes light Slipping behind the mountain when the day turns into night It rises in the evening sky illuminating my every thought Cresting and waning in beauty within love's glow I am caught Love comes swooping down the mountain as gentle song on feathered wing Filling my heart with the melodies that the meadowlark does sing Love is everything to me the keeper of my heart Love comes rushing down the mountain purest joy to me it does impart ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Absolutely beautiful, Marge...this poem is full of the beauty that you see with so much love surrounded. Bravo! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ Darn it ! I wish we were sitting together on the verandah sipping coffee and sharing our thoughts. Oh, well ... next best thing is sharing our 'passionate poetic thoughts' here. You'd be a nice way to spend the day ! Thank you, girlfriend ! Love ya'. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This one says it all, Marge! Very beautiful! Denise |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Yes, this is sweet and lovely Marge love -----is everywhere if one just opens their eyes and see it for what it is. Well written, as usual. netswan |
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Kellsue Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 210Waukesha, WI USA |
Such a beautiful poem!!! Thank you for sharing!! ~Kellsue [This message has been edited by Kellsue (edited 05-06-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ I'm so glad you liked it. I tell you, my car is inhabited by the most magical muse. She sings the sweetest songs in my ear ... I have only to pen them.  NetSwan~ So glad to share the beauty of love that is found everywhere. KellSue~ Welcome to Passion's. I'm glad you treasured this. I visited your web page .... you are a doll and I enjoyed your Beatle's tune. Friendship is second only to love of and from family ... and then again, friends are our 'family' ... you'll love it here. Thank you for your sweet comments. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Marge, You still ROCK!!!! All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Marge....this gave me a warm tingle of pure delight when I read it. It is a lovely poem, so very beautiful. I should like to borrow your muse! Nah, then I'd be deprived of reading your poetry! You depict falling in love so perfectly...I wish that when I fall in love for the first time it is the way you described here.*sigh*....dreamy poem! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is so picturesque Marge. Beautiful imagery ... I feel as if I'm swept away to this beautiful place as I read. Lovely poem. /Kit |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Marge, have you seen the movie "What Dreams May Come?" This poem reminds me of that movie, the colors, the landscapes, the mountains and valleys, the ability to fly. Lovely poem, sweet poet. Corinne |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Oh yes... This sounds like a mountain worth moving.. to....  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jeffrey~ Marge is smiling. ESP~ Thank you so very much. I wish for you to know a love like this ... and when it comes, I hope you will remember this poem. I am a poet of many muses .. there are a couple that I've loaned to others ... but this one I would truly miss if she should ever go ... she sings the sweetest songs to my heart. Kit~ Oh, thank you. That is such a sweet, sweet thing to say. Corinne~ I've not seen the movie yet. But now I just have to. Thank you, hon. Nan~ I like the way you phrased that. I guess love can move mountains or we can move to the mountain of love. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
'Course I'll remember this poem whensoever I fall in love. It shall be added to my collection of favorites to keep forever and ever. Oh Marge, got a muse to lend me?!! I wrote a poem today and it sucks so I think mine is resigning or something! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sometimes I don't know what I like more about your poems...reading them, or reading the replies. You have shared your muses with me before, Marge...now pass one on to Lizzie... Well done, Lady! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ESP~ Lizzie, gal ... check your e-mail ! That little muse is on her way as soon as I hear from you. Karilea~ We are so much alike ... and I love it. The nostalgic, sentimentality is as much a part of your heart as it is mine. I also enjoy reading the replies ... they warm my heart. Yeah ... that little muse is almost packed and ready for the lease/loan program with Lizzie. Thank you, my friend .... and your Mother's Day Gift touched my heart. Love you ... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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