Texas . . .
I had to read that four times before I even took a breathe. Absolutely...wonderful!
A little "picky, picky" thing though. In verse 3, line 1, I think the "away" should be
"a way". And in the next line shouldn't that be "mottled the clouds"? Molted is like a bird shedding feathers.
And in the 4th verse "daring in nestled excelsior" would probably be more correct if it was "daringly nestled in excelsior".
I'm wrong a lot though, so smack if I am, because it's a beautiful poem.
[This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 05-07-2000).]