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When I already given you my heart

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vandana
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0 posted 05-06-2000 11:56 AM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for vandana


I am thinking of you,
I don't know,
What to do,
Am I wrong to love you
Then my heart just won't wait,
I had to give my all for your love,
I had to risk my life,
To give you my heart away,
If I think you love me,
If It's wrong to love you
Just one more night with you,
Just to feel you're mine,
I'm in love with you,
When I already given you my heart,
Give my all for your love tonight,
Then I won't pull through,
without you by my side,
I had to give you my heart away,
And your body next to mine,
You can feel me
Iam looking in your eyes,
I can see you clearly,
Thought I can give you my all
for you love




[This message has been edited by vandana (edited 05-06-2000).]
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Sven
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1 posted 05-06-2000 12:11 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

wonderful Vandana. . .

sometimes, it is hard to know what to do and which way to go isn't it?  all we can do is follow the heart and see what happens. . .

excellent poem. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

netswan
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2 posted 05-07-2000 03:26 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

this is sweet -- but sad --

wonderful poem

netswan
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3 posted 05-08-2000 10:19 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi vandana,

I don't think you can go wrong giving of the heart for that is the purest of emotion, enjoyed very much, thank you for sharing.

Cerenity
 
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