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Devil in Disguise

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CocoBaci
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0 posted 05-06-2000 05:17 AM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for CocoBaci

Devil in Disguise

Twas a brisk November day
When she came to him in her innocent way
Possesing no doubt of his manly charms
Leaving her speechless and with a broken heart

Though the tears she hides inside
How a beloved browneyes
Dissappointed her that night
Tempting to remove her physical charm
Her scars shall heal
Her heart shall forgive
Her soul somehow cannot forget
The capitivity she felt that nite as she wept

Soaring free her wounds now have healed
Time passes on and her life has become
Filled with love and forgiveness
For on that night she knows deep inside
It was the devil in disguise.
© Copyright 2000 CocoBaci - All Rights Reserved
Sudhir Iyer
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1 posted 05-06-2000 05:20 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

CocoBaci,

......WELCOME TO PASSIONS.......


Enjoyed your first post, and keep churning out more such great stuff. We are all waiting to see more of your work...
and enjoy your stay here...

Regards,
Sudhir

 In any moment of decision,
The best thing you can do is the right thing,
The next-best thing is the wrong thing,
And the worst thing you can do is nothing.
- Theodore Roosevelt


[This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 05-06-2000).]
Poet deVine
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2 posted 05-06-2000 07:49 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome to the family! Please check you mail for a special message. This poem is very good, I look forward to reading more from you.  
Kit McCallum
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3 posted 05-06-2000 08:05 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

It is a wise person indeed, who can look back, review their past heartbreaks and find forgiveness. A lovely poem CocoBaci ...

/Kit
Marilyn
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4 posted 05-06-2000 09:38 AM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Welcome to Passions. I enjoyed this piece and the rang with much truth. I hope to see more from you.  

 When you are old and grey and full of sleep,
And nodding by the fire, take down this book,
And slowly read, and dream of the soft look
Your eyes had once, and of their shodows deep;

How many loved your moments of glad grace,
And loved your beauty with love false or true,
But one man loved the pilgrim soul in you,
And loved the sorrows of your changing face...

William Butler Yeats
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5 posted 05-06-2000 10:52 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

CocoBaci~
This is clearly lovely poetry from a
heart that has known both the love and
the sorrow ... and yet continues to long
for another love to come.

Welcome to our family of Passionate poets.
Hope to see more of your tender thoughts.
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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lorilockheart
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6 posted 05-06-2000 05:24 PM       View Profile for lorilockheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lorilockheart

CocoBaci,
Thanks for welcoming me to Passions.

This poem really made me think about innocence.  Even mine.  Very insightful.

I look forward to your others.

Thanks,
Lori
netswan
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7 posted 05-06-2000 05:51 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Welcome to Passions, Coco!

Beautiful poem full of wise insights

netswan
Dawn Eclipse
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8 posted 05-06-2000 06:01 PM       View Profile for Dawn Eclipse   Email Dawn Eclipse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dawn Eclipse

That was a lovely piece.  Welcome to passions!  

 "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying."
Harry Anderson, "Night Court"

*Cassandra Roseen*
Denise
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9 posted 05-06-2000 09:29 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Welcome to Passions, CocoBaci! This is a wonderful poem! I enjoyed this very much!

Denise
Janet Marie
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10 posted 05-06-2000 09:48 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Hi Coco and add my welcome to the list...
this is very well written and expressed.
like the style you wrote this in.
very lovely...look forward to more.
take care, jm

 It's amazing
How you make your face just like a wall
How you take your heart and turn it off
How I turn my head and you lose it all ...
And it's unnerving
How one move just puts me by myself
There you go just trusting someone else
Now I know I put us both through hell ...
I'm not sayin
That there was nothing wrong
I just didn't think you'd ever get tired of me
And I'm not sayin
We ever had the right to hold on
I just didn't wanna let you get away from me.
~MB20~Leave


 
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