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To Your Heart

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Sven
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0 posted 05-05-2000 11:53 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sven

To your heart, mine has always been true
No force in the world could ever part me from you
Always have I treasured your love
Never shared with another, my angel from above

Your love to me is quite a treasure
It means the world to me beyond any measure
Your heart, so fragile I could never betray
With your heart, my heart would like forever to stay

To your heart I have pledged my own
Since I have been with you, my love for you has grown
Your love means the world to me
And I will do whatever it takes to make your heart see

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

© Copyright 2000 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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1 posted 05-06-2000 12:23 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

ahhhh sweet Sven...devotion be thy name
perfection from your heart and pen.
lucky lady , I say.
take care jm
Temptress
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2 posted 05-06-2000 03:54 AM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress

Very Sweetly written. If this is your reality, I wish you nothing but the best in your endeavours.

 Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"
tracie66
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3 posted 05-06-2000 04:51 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Sven~
as always ever so tender  
Lovely read..Thanks
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Sudhir Iyer
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4 posted 05-06-2000 05:13 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Sven,

As romantic as you ever get, such a nice flow of thoughts, thanks for giving me a good piece  of work to read..

Regards,
Sudhir

 In any moment of decision,
The best thing you can do is the right thing,
The next-best thing is the wrong thing,
And the worst thing you can do is nothing.
- Theodore Roosevelt
Sven
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5 posted 05-06-2000 11:33 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Thank you all. . .

Janet, I thought that my name was Sven?  Thank you my friend, I am only the messenger

Temptress, thank you for your wishes. . .

Tracie, thank you so much, your words mean a lot. . .

Sudhir, you're welcome and thank you!!

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Lone Wolf
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6 posted 05-06-2000 08:47 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Very romantic and heartfelt....lucky lady indeed.....hope she likes it....
Excellent writing, Sven.


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
CocoBaci
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7 posted 05-06-2000 10:06 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

Absolute romance in its pure form
Your poetry is most enjoyed
CocoBaci
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8 posted 05-06-2000 10:45 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Oh to be the subject of such a lovely declaration! This lady must be so special to you, Sven.  Beautiful writing, my friend...

~ Claire

 Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau
Kellsue
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9 posted 05-06-2000 10:54 PM       View Profile for Kellsue   Email Kellsue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kellsue

Beautiful and touching poem.  I'm new here and it's the first I've read of yours, I'll be sure to search for your others!

~Kellsue  


 Reflect upon your present blessings-of which every man has many-not on your past misfortunes, of which all men have some. ~Charles Dickens

We make a living by what we get, but we make a life by what we give. ~Winston Churchill
Sven
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10 posted 05-06-2000 11:03 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Thank you again my friends. . .

LW, thank you my friend

CocoBaci, glad that you enjoy my simple rhymes. . .

Meadowmuse, thank you so much. . .

Kellsue, welcome to Passions!  Thank you for your words and I hope that you enjoy your stay here. . . but there are many other poets here who are better than I, be sure to look for their writings too!!

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

lorilockheart
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11 posted 05-07-2000 11:46 AM       View Profile for lorilockheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lorilockheart

Sven,
This is the second poem of yours I've read.  You are really a romantic - a true poet at heart.  Only true love could inspire someone this much.  You are lucky - and so is she.

I am searching for your others.
Lori
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12 posted 05-07-2000 11:50 AM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

Sven-

As always, your pen of passion and romance flares brightly in this piece. this was just simply sweet and beautiful hon. A lucky lady she is!! Take care,
amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
Sven
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13 posted 05-07-2000 03:46 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Lori, thank you. . . I'm a born Romantic. . . it's all I know. . . and I hope that you like the others as well. . . humbled by your words. . .

Amy!!  Thank you so much. . . my pen has been busy of late. . .glad that you liked. . . take care yourself!!

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Kit McCallum
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14 posted 05-07-2000 03:54 PM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Your genuine devotion shines through this lovely verse. Fortunate is the woman on the receiving end of your love Sven.  Beautiful poem.

/Kit
JamesMichael
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15 posted 05-07-2000 04:00 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

"Your heart so fragile..I could never betray."  Yes Sven that describes love so perfectly...when I love someone my heart is soft also...and I would never want to hurt the one I love.   James
kitkat
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16 posted 05-08-2000 12:01 AM       View Profile for kitkat   Email kitkat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kitkat

Sven- you are really a TRUE Romantic. Lucky be the lady in your life to have a man who writes so wonderfully.
Sven
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17 posted 05-08-2000 12:15 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Kit, thank you so much. . .

james, I know that you are far to gentle to hurt anyone my friend. . .

Kitkat, yes I am. . . and I always will be. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

First__Knight
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18 posted 05-09-2000 10:18 PM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

No greater gift could you share than from the depths of your heart.....This is great Sven

 A man does not love a woman because she is beautiful...But she is beautiful because he loves her.


Marina
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19 posted 05-09-2000 11:07 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

i just want you to know, I am going to start sending you my klennex bill!!

Marina
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20 posted 05-09-2000 11:10 PM       View Profile for REBECCA ALLYN   Email REBECCA ALLYN   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for REBECCA ALLYN

Very sweet!!!!
How lucky she is!!

     Becky

Irie
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21 posted 05-09-2000 11:23 PM       View Profile for Irie   Email Irie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irie

Sven...
You blow me away. You are so full of love.
It just keeps gettin' better!  

Oh, and Marina....Crack me up!  
He does write good tear jerkers eh?

~Sheri
Sven
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22 posted 05-10-2000 01:27 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

First Knight, thank you

Marina, just start making me a tab!

Rebecca, thank you and welcome to Passions!!

Irie, glad that you really liked. . .and not tear jerkers, just from my heart. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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A beautiful outpouring of devoted love, Sven.  *S*

 
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