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To Your Heart
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To Your Heart |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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To your heart, mine has always been true No force in the world could ever part me from you Always have I treasured your love Never shared with another, my angel from above Your love to me is quite a treasure It means the world to me beyond any measure Your heart, so fragile I could never betray With your heart, my heart would like forever to stay To your heart I have pledged my own Since I have been with you, my love for you has grown Your love means the world to me And I will do whatever it takes to make your heart see --------------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
ahhhh sweet Sven...devotion be thy name perfection from your heart and pen. lucky lady , I say. take care jm |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Very Sweetly written. If this is your reality, I wish you nothing but the best in your endeavours. Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sven~ as always ever so tender  Lovely read..Thanks Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Sven, As romantic as you ever get, such a nice flow of thoughts, thanks for giving me a good piece of work to read.. Regards, Sudhir In any moment of decision, The best thing you can do is the right thing, The next-best thing is the wrong thing, And the worst thing you can do is nothing. - Theodore Roosevelt |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all. . . Janet, I thought that my name was Sven? Thank you my friend, I am only the messenger Temptress, thank you for your wishes. . . Tracie, thank you so much, your words mean a lot. . . Sudhir, you're welcome and thank you!! --------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Very romantic and heartfelt....lucky lady indeed.....hope she likes it.... Excellent writing, Sven. Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Absolute romance in its pure form Your poetry is most enjoyed CocoBaci |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Oh to be the subject of such a lovely declaration! This lady must be so special to you, Sven. Beautiful writing, my friend... ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Kellsue Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 210Waukesha, WI USA |
Beautiful and touching poem. I'm new here and it's the first I've read of yours, I'll be sure to search for your others! ~Kellsue  Reflect upon your present blessings-of which every man has many-not on your past misfortunes, of which all men have some. ~Charles Dickens We make a living by what we get, but we make a life by what we give. ~Winston Churchill |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you again my friends. . . LW, thank you my friend CocoBaci, glad that you enjoy my simple rhymes. . . Meadowmuse, thank you so much. . . Kellsue, welcome to Passions! Thank you for your words and I hope that you enjoy your stay here. . . but there are many other poets here who are better than I, be sure to look for their writings too!! -------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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lorilockheart Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 206Alabama |
Sven, This is the second poem of yours I've read. You are really a romantic - a true poet at heart. Only true love could inspire someone this much. You are lucky - and so is she. I am searching for your others. Lori |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Sven- As always, your pen of passion and romance flares brightly in this piece. this was just simply sweet and beautiful hon. A lucky lady she is!! Take care, amy ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Lori, thank you. . . I'm a born Romantic. . . it's all I know. . . and I hope that you like the others as well. . . humbled by your words. . . Amy!! Thank you so much. . . my pen has been busy of late. . .glad that you liked. . . take care yourself!! -------------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Your genuine devotion shines through this lovely verse. Fortunate is the woman on the receiving end of your love Sven. Beautiful poem. /Kit |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Your heart so fragile..I could never betray." Yes Sven that describes love so perfectly...when I love someone my heart is soft also...and I would never want to hurt the one I love. James |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Sven- you are really a TRUE Romantic. Lucky be the lady in your life to have a man who writes so wonderfully. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Kit, thank you so much. . . james, I know that you are far to gentle to hurt anyone my friend. . . Kitkat, yes I am. . . and I always will be. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
No greater gift could you share than from the depths of your heart.....This is great Sven A man does not love a woman because she is beautiful...But she is beautiful because he loves her. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
i just want you to know, I am going to start sending you my klennex bill!! Marina |
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REBECCA ALLYN Member
since 2000-05-09
Posts 91Lima,Ohio |
Very sweet!!!! How lucky she is!! Becky |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Sven... You blow me away. You are so full of love. It just keeps gettin' better!  Oh, and Marina....Crack me up!  He does write good tear jerkers eh? ~Sheri |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
First Knight, thank you Marina, just start making me a tab! Rebecca, thank you and welcome to Passions!! Irie, glad that you really liked. . .and not tear jerkers, just from my heart. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Brandyn Sand Member
since 2000-04-21
Posts 82Columbia, SC |
A beautiful outpouring of devoted love, Sven. *S* |
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