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jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

0 posted 2000-05-05 11:20 PM



The Truth About Fishing

My trip to the gulf coast was nice,
relaxed,
no deadlines to meet,
no rush to arrive,
or leave.
The days were warm,
soft breezes blew,
and the sky was cloudless.
The only thing missing,
was you.

The water was nice,
and warm,
tantalizing,
enticing the soul to swim on and on,
forever and ever,
to become one with the creatures of the sea;
but something was missing…
you.

The fish weren't biting,
but what did I care;
the spirit was high,
floating on air,
I had sunshine,
warm winds,
freedom to do as I pleased,
yet, I couldn't help missing…
you.

Then it was time to go home,
to lose that idyllic atmosphere,
to again face the tribulations of reality,
and work,
and traffic,
and day to day existence;
but I didn't care.
I knew you would finally be there.


W. James Beard, Jr.


© Copyright 2000 Wesley James Beard, Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-05-05 11:30 PM


oh man..big ole sweet*SIGH*...
I hope she gave you a big ole kiss for this.
how lovely and perfect...
this was such a serene and calming poem to read in its tender longing...
very nice J, very...
love a man who writes with devotion.*smile*
thank you for the very kind and encouraging replies to my work.
take care, jm

Dawn Eclipse
Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637
The Horsehead Nebula
2 posted 2000-05-05 11:42 PM


Ahh... that was beautiful.     So much heart in so little wording.  I enjoyed this one very much.  

 "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying."
Harry Anderson, "Night Court"

*Cassandra Roseen*

Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
3 posted 2000-05-06 01:30 AM


Strange isn't it, how you can be alone in a crowd or completed by just one person...well done poem!
netswan
Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
4 posted 2000-05-07 03:21 AM


Wow sounds like next time you should
take her along.

well written

netswan

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