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Tia
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since 05-05-2000
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0 posted 05-05-2000 11:06 PM       View Profile for Tia   Email Tia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tia

red....
the blood dripping down your fingertips,
towards the floor.
what am i thinking?
what did i do this for?

my thoughts over power my body...
a sudden thought of death
a few more actions...
there's my last breath.

i regret things too much
i should think before i do
never let your thoughts
get the best of you....

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Temptress
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1 posted 05-06-2000 03:38 AM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress

Interesting...


 Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"
tracie66
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since 01-18-2000
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2 posted 05-06-2000 04:56 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Mmmmm interesting I have to agree, sure hope this is not of someone who has or is slitting their wrist   is everything okay??
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Sudhir Iyer
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3 posted 05-06-2000 05:06 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Intriguing is correct...

I hope this is not your current mental state. If so, drop the suicidal tendencies, and embrace, life and fun. Harsh things do happen, Hard times follows us, but to see the better things in life is the brave heart's legion...

Take care,

Regards, sudhir.

 In any moment of decision,
The best thing you can do is the right thing,
The next-best thing is the wrong thing,
And the worst thing you can do is nothing.
- Theodore Roosevelt
netswan
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4 posted 05-07-2000 03:39 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Hi Tia -- interesting poem.
yes, always best to think about things
before doing them

netswan
 
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