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A Million Stars (haiku)

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Zelda
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Glowing bright at night
Filling my eyes with delight
Heaven's winking stars.

© Copyright 2000 Zelda - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 05-05-2000 11:08 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Zelda~

Very, very nice
A glowing star shines brightly
In your eyes I see

I like your Haiku/Senyru, my friend.
Very nicely done.
~*Marge*~


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2 posted 05-06-2000 12:51 AM       View Profile for LoveBug   Email LoveBug   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LoveBug

I love your beautiful description of the stars!   Great job.

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
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3 posted 05-06-2000 04:05 AM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress

Excellent description this is.  
I love it.


 Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"
tracie66
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4 posted 05-06-2000 04:44 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

A lovingly glowing Haiku   well done
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Zelda
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5 posted 05-06-2000 01:06 PM       View Profile for Zelda   Email Zelda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Zelda

Thanks all.  I wasn't sure if this was a haiku--I knew that the syllables were 5-7-5, but wasn't sure if the theme was appropriate.  
Thanks again!
Z  
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6 posted 05-07-2000 09:28 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Zelda,

This is lovely, very true those stars do wink at you, I have not got to welcome you to passions, so welcome its wonderful to have you here.

Cerenity
brian madden
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There is something magical about the stars at night, each one a heavenly soul dazzling in a void of darkness. All of which you captured in that wonderful Haiku
Honeybee
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8 posted 05-07-2000 02:00 PM       View Profile for Honeybee   Email Honeybee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Honeybee

~Zelda~

I have always been a huge fan of haikus and senryus.  Your haiku glows bright like your beautiful description of the stars at night!  Excellent work!  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee
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9 posted 05-07-2000 04:34 PM       View Profile for Dawn Eclipse   Email Dawn Eclipse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dawn Eclipse

Great description of the stars.  They hold so much more beauty than any of us can ever imagine.  

 "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying."
Harry Anderson, "Night Court"

*Cassandra Roseen*
Zelda
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10 posted 05-07-2000 10:29 PM       View Profile for Zelda   Email Zelda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Zelda

Gee!
Such nice replies!!
Thank you all so much!
Z
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