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Tuck
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since 2000-04-29
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0 posted 2000-05-05 09:47 PM


Someone is standing on the stairs
And laughing down the hall behind me
I can hear their every thought
But when will Jaycee find me?
When will Jaycee find me?
Oh, to talk to him
To give and get a word or more
Perhaps we'd share a kiss-
But dreams are dreams and
where wouuld that leave us?
People are walking up the stairs
And talking on the floor above me
Are they speaking of dinner or
When Jaycee will find me?
But when will Jaycee find me?
When will Jaycee find me?


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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
Mobile, AL
1 posted 2000-05-06 03:42 AM


I don't know if this poem was more toward someone personally than for everyone here to read and comment on, but it was an interesting poem at any rate.  


 Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"

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