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Master
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since 1999-08-18
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0 posted 2000-05-05 09:46 PM


*Another one of my translations, again it's A. Pushkin. (I hope you're not too tired)

My friend, forgotten are the fleeting era’s prints
Forgotten is my youth’s uprising flow
Don’t question me on what I’m lacking since,
On what I felt in the times of joy and woe,
On what I loved, on how I was forlorn
I’ve yet to taste true joy, -- that is inborn;
But you are innocent! conceived for only bliss
Believe in it and seize each moment’s portion
Your soul was made for friendship and devotion,
A passionate and loving kiss.
Your soul is pure and unexposed to sadness
Your conscience is as bright as any day
Why then perceive the lunacy and madness
Of the uninteresting hearsay?
It would replace your peace with aggravation
You’ll tremble with your heart and cry in bed
Your soul would lose its trust in agitation
And you, perhaps... my love may grow to dread
Who knows? perhaps forever... No, my dear
I fear to cast the only joy away
Don’t ask for dangerous confessions here
Today I love, I’m happy for today

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 "I will not whole die, my soul in sacred lyre,
will outlive my dust and will escape decay,
And in the moonlit sphere, my glory will not tire
As long as poets still remain" A. Pushkin




[This message has been edited by Master (edited 05-07-2000).]

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Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-05-06 01:03 AM


WOW...this is simply exquisite...
so very beautiful...each line is more so than the next...its gorgeous.

"’ve yet to taste true joy, -- that is inborn;
But you are innocent! conceived for only bliss
Believe in it and seize each moment’s portion
Your soul was made for friendship and devotion,
A passionate and loving kiss.
Your soul is pure and unexposed to sadness
Your conscience is as bright as any day"

perfection here.
take care, jm


Master
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since 1999-08-18
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2 posted 2000-05-06 06:21 AM


Thank you Janet, I'm glad you liked it!
Denise
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3 posted 2000-05-06 10:00 PM


Well done, again, Master!  

Denise

Master
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4 posted 2000-05-07 12:27 PM


Thank you for resurrecting this one Denise!
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