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Nicole
Senior Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

0 posted 2000-05-05 05:50 PM

How easy is it for me to recall
The touch of your velveteen lips
Which brightened life’s dreary pall
In wonderfully delicate sips

How easy is it for me to burn
Your lover’s touch ignited my skin
While each secret duly learn’d
For each found in one, again

How eas’ly found for me to cry
Tears of a forgotten delicacy
Relief shined a’glinted eye
Enwrapped in a dream eternally

How eas’ly found for me to live
To feel the warmth of your smile
Privy to the tender look you give
In your own endearing style

How easily am I to dream
Such things dear, and much more
Of you and I in life’s great scheme
And all there is for us in store

May I never be too busy to help another's load,
Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed.

--Author Unknown

Alicat
Member Elite

since 1999-05-23

Posts 4094
Coastal Texas

1 posted 2000-05-05 06:32 PM

How easy it is for me to see how much you've improved. Very well written, Satiate, with a wonderfully inspiring, romantical message.

Alicat

Dawn Eclipse
Senior Member

since 2000-01-31

Posts 637
The Horsehead Nebula

2 posted 2000-05-05 07:37 PM

That was a beautiful poem, with a very lovely message.

I enjoyed it very much!!!

"Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying."
Harry Anderson, "Night Court"

*Cassandra Roseen*

Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2000-05-05 11:12 PM

This was well constructed Kamla. I very much enjoyed reading it. I can very much relate to the message here as well. Excellent (applause).

When you are old and grey and full of sleep,
And nodding by the fire, take down this book,
And slowly read, and dream of the soft look
Your eyes had once, and of their shodows deep;

How many loved your moments of glad grace,
And loved your beauty with love false or true,
But one man loved the pilgrim soul in you,
And loved the sorrows of your changing face...

William Butler Yeats

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2000-05-05 11:21 PM

Satiate~
This is endearing.
I enjoyed the flow of thoughts.

'How eas’ly found for me to live
To feel the warmth of your smile
Privy to the tender look you give
In your own endearing style'

Nicely rendered sentiments.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2000-05-05 11:57 PM

Excellent Satiate...I can feel the warmth and the thoughts of love coming from this poem. . . you have done very well. . .truly a very romantic poem. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Danny Holloway
Member Elite

since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

6 posted 2000-05-06 11:06 AM

~~simply said, this is very nice, with such a delicate touch and hopeful message~~
dh

A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.

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