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Dream's Recollection

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Nicole
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0 posted 05-05-2000 05:50 PM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Nicole

How easy is it for me to recall
The touch of your velveteen lips
Which brightened lifeís dreary pall
In wonderfully delicate sips

How easy is it for me to burn
Your loverís touch ignited my skin
While each secret duly learníd
For each found in one, again

How easíly found for me to cry
Tears of a forgotten delicacy
Relief shined aíglinted eye
Enwrapped in a dream eternally

How easíly found for me to live
To feel the warmth of your smile
Privy to the tender look you give
In your own endearing style

How easily am I to dream
Such things dear, and much more
Of you and I in lifeís great scheme
And all there is for us in store



 May I never be too busy to help another's load,
Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed.

--Author Unknown
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Alicat
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1 posted 05-05-2000 06:32 PM       View Profile for Alicat   Email Alicat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alicat

How easy it is for me to see how much you've improved.  Very well written, Satiate, with a wonderfully inspiring, romantical message.




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2 posted 05-05-2000 07:37 PM       View Profile for Dawn Eclipse   Email Dawn Eclipse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dawn Eclipse

That was a beautiful poem, with a very lovely message.     I enjoyed it very much!!!

 "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying."
Harry Anderson, "Night Court"

*Cassandra Roseen*
Marilyn
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3 posted 05-05-2000 11:12 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

This was well constructed Kamla. I very much enjoyed reading it. I can very much relate to the message here as well. Excellent (applause).  

 When you are old and grey and full of sleep,
And nodding by the fire, take down this book,
And slowly read, and dream of the soft look
Your eyes had once, and of their shodows deep;

How many loved your moments of glad grace,
And loved your beauty with love false or true,
But one man loved the pilgrim soul in you,
And loved the sorrows of your changing face...

William Butler Yeats
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4 posted 05-05-2000 11:21 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Satiate~
This is endearing.
I enjoyed the flow of thoughts.

'How easíly found for me to live
To feel the warmth of your smile
Privy to the tender look you give
In your own endearing style'

Nicely rendered sentiments.
~*Marge*~


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5 posted 05-05-2000 11:57 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Excellent Satiate...I can feel the warmth and the thoughts of love coming from this poem. . . you have done very well. . .truly a very romantic poem. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Danny Holloway
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6 posted 05-06-2000 11:06 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

~~simply said, this is very nice, with such a delicate touch and hopeful message~~
dh


 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.

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