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Seymour Tabin
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                   Kim

I remember going a little aflame,
Trying to think of my first daughters name.
A magical name to set her apart.
A name that would come straight from my heart.

One that when sounded and softly heard,
Would echo like the call of a bird.
No matter whose lip or why or whim,
My heart skips a beat each time I hear Kim.

It came from inside a part of a goal,
It came from inside a part of my soul.
It came from the magic of a wishing well.
It came from inside my hearts woven spell.

Each time it is called and I hear its sound,
My eyes light up and heart starts to pound.
It echoes like magic sets her apart
And gives me a twinge straight in my heart.

A flower is a flower, a name a name,
But the sound of Kim ever strikes me a flame.

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Of course this is a precious name...Kim was a gift, straight from Him!

Well done, Sy!
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ST, this is really a joyful read.  The sound of a daughters name is always the sweetest music to a Father's ear.
Very nice poem~~~

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Martie
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Sy, this is precious and so full of love.  Thank you for sharing it.
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Seymour, this poem speaks eloquently of your love for her, regardless of her name. Bless you.

~ Claire

 Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau
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5 posted 05-05-2000 06:41 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Sunshine, And well said Sunshine. *L*

Danny, You are so right, thank you.

Martie, Thank you for the read and comment. *L*

Meadow, Sweet comment, thank you claire. *L*
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Seymour~
How tender this is.
What adoration from dad.
I smile just knowing you smile
at the beauty of her name.

Next month my son, David, will marry his Kim,
and a delight she is in our lives.
Love ya'
~*Marge*~


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It came from inside a part of a goal,
It came from inside a part of my soul.
It came from the magic of a wishing well.
It came from inside my hearts woven spell.

Each time it is called and I hear its sound,
My eyes light up and heart starts to pound.
It echoes like magic sets her apart
And gives me a twinge straight in my heart.
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you just need to be kissed for this one...
your adorable when your writing adoration.
this is so perfect!!
take care, jm

DiObear
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Such a beautiful poem.  I'm sure your Kim would agree.
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Sy~
Such a lovely poem for such a lovely name and I'm sure she is as lovely as her dad  
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 05-06-2000 01:13 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Marge, You are a love, thank you for the sweet comment. *L*

Janet, And you are adorable with your comments. *L*

DiObear, She does and I thank you.

Tracie, Lovelier and I thank you. *L*
 
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