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Cerenity
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0 posted 2000-05-05 10:04 AM



The Sun A Gift From God


A ray of sunshine can be
priceless to ones soul.
It offers a new beginning of
life each and every time
it appears.

When life is weighted down
with heavy laden load,
it offers enlightenment to a
fresh and clear start to
ease your mind.

To watch this magnificent
piece of art begin its  
journey across the vast stretch
of our planet even thought
we know where it will end its ride,
we are struck simply by
its power.

To turn our attention towards
the simple fact  we would
not exist if it were not their can
change the way we perceive
our own lives, thus giving our
laden  load less power.  

To know that there is still a higher
being that had to create this
marvel that sustains our live force,
the sun brings us closer to the
one that made life possible
to begin with.

And we must not forget that
the power of the suns rays
can bring us to our knees with
it ability to provide nature’s
beauty, which will soften
any souls heart.

So the next time you see the
sun coming up over the
horizon, remember that with
out it we just simply
would not exist and that
it was a gift to us from
one who cares deeply for us.


By,  Cerenity






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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-05-05 10:19 AM


Cerenity~
Sugar, this is so uplifting.
You've given the rays of the sun ...
a new shine.
Big smiles from this corner of the world.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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2 posted 2000-05-05 10:34 AM


I cannot help but be thrilled with this piece of work...well done!
Cerenity
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3 posted 2000-05-05 10:48 AM


Hi you two,

Well I have to say that Marge has been posting some awesome look up things will get better poems lately and so at just about sunrise this morning in my all so familar wading in the muck mind set I remembered Marge and her sweet abilitys to help all that come across her path and even if the muck wants to hang I don't and this is what came of it. (poem) So my thanks goes to both of you for your kind words and to you Marge I looked up and saw the sun. And also who made it and he gives strength when we ask right, right.

Love  Cerenity

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4 posted 2000-05-06 02:08 PM


Bumping this beauty back for another round ... sometimes the sun just HAS to shine !

Cerenity~ ...
your glow lights the day !

BUMPITY - BUMP - BUMP !
~*Marge*~


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5 posted 2000-05-06 02:22 PM


The sun indeed is uplifting...I am a sun person...but there is a deeper meaning here I know, and it is lovely.  
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6 posted 2000-05-06 09:40 PM


Very beautifully put, Cerenity! Thanks for the reminder!

Denise

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