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I dreamt of you last night

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Kevin
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0 posted 05-05-2000 01:10 AM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Kevin

I dreamt of you last night
it was nice to see your face
without having to fight
through the confines of this place

I still can see your smile
I cant hide the hints of mine
still knowing all the while
that my dreams Ive left behind.

I know well never be
sometimes things just work that way
you mean everything to me
and my love grows with the day

You may keep your love for him
but your smile stays with my heart
the light it shines will never dim
its glowed within me from the start

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Marina
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1 posted 05-05-2000 01:41 AM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Kevin, there is nothing more painful then loving one who does not love you any longer.  Or perhaps never did.  Very well written.

Marina
TerryW
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2 posted 05-05-2000 01:44 AM       View Profile for TerryW   Email TerryW   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit TerryW's Home Page   View IP for TerryW

Kevin,
     Very well written.  I, too, know what it is liketo love someone who loves someone else.  Very nice way to let your feelings out.   Thank you for sharing!

 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.
Sudhir Iyer
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3 posted 05-05-2000 03:37 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Nice poem with flow of true emotions. I liked this one, particularly the lines

...
but your smile stays with my heart
the light it shines will never dim
its glowed within me from the start

Keep Writing,
Regards, sudhir.

 In any moment of decision,
The best thing you can do is the right thing,
The next-best thing is the wrong thing,
And the worst thing you can do is nothing.
- Theodore Roosevelt
~ViXeN~
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4 posted 05-05-2000 07:50 AM       View Profile for ~ViXeN~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~ViXeN~

Kev,
This is so beautiful! =-)
Wow, i think we all know how you feel in this situation, you expressed it really well
... She's a lucky girl. =-)
Marge Tindal
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5 posted 05-05-2000 08:01 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Kevin~
This is lovely with a touch of sadness.

'I still can see your smile
I can't hide the hints of mine'

A beautiful line, sweetie.
~*Marge*~




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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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6 posted 05-05-2000 08:06 AM       View Profile for Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Email Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Roniece Dawson-Bruce

Kevin - this is lovely - written with sadness - but still lovely   I hope your sadness won't last too long

Roniece
Kevin
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7 posted 05-05-2000 10:24 PM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kevin

marge, good to see ya =)

shan, still cant do it =(


everyone else thanks, i hope it wasnt to identifiable, keep smiling
Tia
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8 posted 05-05-2000 11:17 PM       View Profile for Tia   Email Tia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tia

that was a very nice poem.i know what it is like to feel like that.good luck in the future...
Tia
 
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