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Brain Lock

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spiked
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Brain Lock


The eyes of night have shed their tear
But it is not the night in which I fear
The pain of growing
Cold alone
Leave chills that I have always known
Would be the end for me I dream
To close my eyes, invade my being
I'll stand and fight this weary eye
This life i have i cannot die
I've so much more to give you see
Yet time has taken its toll on me.
So with each moment I try and break
This fear inside so it won't take
My will



 Richard Rendall

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serenity blaze
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1 posted 05-05-2000 01:03 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

How could this not touch my heart when it so closely speaks for my soul?  Beautiful and long over-due...Now that the brain is unlocked, let it flow....serenity applauds..
spiked
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2 posted 05-05-2000 01:09 AM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

Thanks Serenity
thanks for pushing me as you know I have sat idle without posting.
I am thankful that I have a shoulder to lie my weary head on and lift my weakened spirit.
again hugs and thanks
Rich
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3 posted 05-06-2000 05:25 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Back to the top for you---am I playing favorites--bet your ass.  Deserves a second spin...
netswan
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I agree with BTT this is a fantastic
poem

netswan  --)
mete out
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5 posted 05-07-2000 09:55 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

***spiked,
i can relate to the emotions in this piece so much, this piece is great.
thanks for sharing!


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.


spiked
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6 posted 05-11-2000 02:40 AM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

Thank you ver much netswan.
Was written from the heart mete out.
Thanks for your support
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7 posted 05-11-2000 08:21 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

doing it again--BTT!  Now.  Put up with me or write another....
 
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