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Brain Lock
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Brain Lock |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA 
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Brain Lock The eyes of night have shed their tear But it is not the night in which I fear The pain of growing Cold alone Leave chills that I have always known Would be the end for me I dream To close my eyes, invade my being I'll stand and fight this weary eye This life i have i cannot die I've so much more to give you see Yet time has taken its toll on me. So with each moment I try and break This fear inside so it won't take My will Richard Rendall |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
How could this not touch my heart when it so closely speaks for my soul? Beautiful and long over-due...Now that the brain is unlocked, let it flow....serenity applauds.. |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thanks Serenity thanks for pushing me as you know I have sat idle without posting. I am thankful that I have a shoulder to lie my weary head on and lift my weakened spirit. again hugs and thanks Rich |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Back to the top for you---am I playing favorites--bet your ass. Deserves a second spin... |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
I agree with BTT this is a fantastic poem netswan --) |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
***spiked, i can relate to the emotions in this piece so much, this piece is great. thanks for sharing! I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thank you ver much netswan. Was written from the heart mete out. Thanks for your support |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
doing it again--BTT! Now. Put up with me or write another.... |
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