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Marge Tindal
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Easy Remembering
~*Marge Tindal*~

Today you returned
to rest upon my cheek as a tear
After all this time
it caught me in amaze
As I reached up to brush you away
you clung to my fingertips
I caressed you
smiling with easy-remembering
at all the wonderful thoughts
you left with me
It was then I realized
that even though we aren't together
you were worth remembering
Somewhere I think the same song
is playing my memory for you
I just wanted to let you know
it's okay ...





 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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1 posted 05-04-2000 11:22 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

You sweet thang, you. An old love coming back as a tear. What a terrific thought! This is brilliant, Marge  
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Balladeer~
Thank you, sweetie.  
It happened today driving home from work.  
Darn that radio station anyway !
I could use a great big hug !
Love ya'
~*Me*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marge hon, I'm not Balladeer, but here's a GREAT BIG HUG!!!!!! from little old me.  Those darn songs can bring back some memories, can't they?
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Thank you, Martie~
That's what sisters are for !
Yeah .. but know what ?  
I still love the song !
Makes my heart know that love is worth
all the memories it leaves with us.
I love ya'
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Oh, sweet Marge.  How songs and scents and scenes can trigger memories!  Bittersweet the taste of tears...I think this is one of your best, Marge.

Corinne
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6 posted 05-05-2000 12:56 AM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Marge....
This is great writing!!  Oh how I have been there too.  Tears can be bittersweet, but cleansing to us.  This is one of your best, I think!!!  
LW


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Corinne~
Honest .. it sneaked right up on me.
It was really a sweet surprise that
I was flooded with so many memories
of a super relationship.
The smiles outnumber the tears ...
Thanks, hon.  
I already knew you would like it ...  

LoneWolf~
It really was a pleasant experience once
the memories started flooding their way to my heart.
Thank you, I like the way it flowed to the page and am glad each person has found a memory in it.
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marge~
     Oh, my dear, you make me want to shed a lovely single tear just reading this!  I am breathless once again!   And I am throwing you the biggest hug you have ever seen!


{{{{{{HUGGS}}}}}}}

Love Ya~~~~~



 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
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This is just beautiful Marge(y)...really it is.

Lucky tear I would say!

Hugs honey

K
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Margie this is so perfect...
so sweet and tender...
you have just been crankin out the poems here of late my girl.
you and that muse of yours are on a roll.
Keep em coming...and we'll keep smiling.
loved this one!!
take care, jm
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Marge - this is truly beautiful !  how wonderful our memories   your writing is very very lovely  

Roniece


[This message has been edited by Roniece Dawson-Bruce (edited 05-05-2000).]
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Marge,

You write so beautifully. Your work seems to make me sit back and remember an awful lot. Thank you for sharing that incredible poem.

~S
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Marge~
Yep they'll do it to ya every time, but at least they were good memories ones worth remembering  
Sweet memories to ya, sweet Marge
Luv Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


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TerryW~
Thank you for being YOU !
I feel the hug.  

Kamla~
Thank you, my little butterfly.
Always love seeing you in here.

JanetMarie~
I am always pleased when my memories
come to the forefront of an otherwise
busy day.  Thank you for your kind comments.

Roniece~
Thank you so very much.
I am so pleased that you enjoy what I write.

FadingSun~
That is a simply lovely comment.
If sharing my heart causes you to sift through your memories - I'm more than pleased.
Thank you, dear.
~*Marge*~



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Tracie~
I wouldn't miss your sweet comment for anything.  Thank you, hon.
Yeah, it was a good memory.
Love ya'
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marge, this is precious! A tear being a memory...that is just the most wonderful image ever! Your poetry continues to bring a smile to my soul. *sigh*, this one really touched me!

Love and hugs(huge big ones),
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
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Great feelings, Marge.

I am so deeply moved that I am committing a crime puting down whatever flows...same kind of thoughts...inspired by your poem...I don't even know if this is going to be any good...
-------------
My dear, if you want to leave,
Just leave the way you came,
like a wave
My dear, if going is what you wish,
Please go where you wish,
like a fish.

Precious friend, while you go,
I think you must know
That many times you will return,
With each tear-drop, my eyes that would churn.

Take care my dear friend,
I know not where this might end,
But one thing that is sure,
Forever I will care, I assure...

The songs that we sang,
The words that we spoke,
Memories from the past, bells that rang,
Feelings will sooth my heart, each stroke.

Take care my lovely friend,
You have made footprints in the sand
Remember you, I will always do,
Forever I will have visons of you...
----------------

Regards
Sudhir.


 In any moment of decision,
The best thing you can do is the right thing,
The next-best thing is the wrong thing,
And the worst thing you can do is nothing.
- Theodore Roosevelt


[This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 05-05-2000).]
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ESP~
Thank you for your sincerity.
It is always such a pleasure for me to read your comments.  I'm so pleased that you enjoyed this.
*HUGS*

Sudhir~
Anytime the thoughts of one poet inspires the pen of another - a compliment takes wing.
Thank you for your compliment.
Your thoughts are lovely.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Hi Marge,

I have no fancy icons, or pictures to give but I do have a hug and you in my heart and a tear to seal it with, beautiful poem dear.

Love always,

Cerenity
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...and the salt of you upon my tongue took me back to the sweetness of our youth...

Marge, use that if you want...

I probably will.

GREAT JOB!
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...and the salt of you upon my tongue took me back to the sweetness of our youth...

Marge, use that if you want...

I probably will.

GREAT JOB!
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Marge, reading your poetry reminds me of how I feel about certain actors, directors,  singers and artists.  There are those that are so talented that I know I will never be disappointed with their work.  Your poetry brings a promise of delight, of warmth, of anticipation, and of emotion.  Welcome to the elite!

 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.

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Cerenity~
A hug from your heart is more than I would ever hope for ... thank you.

Sunshine~
Thank you for that beautiful thought.
Glad you enjoyed.

Danny~
Oh, sweet Danny~
What a beautiful compliment you've paid me.
It would be my hope that I always live up to your expectations ... know that I always will try.
You sure have placed a smile on this lady's face today !  Thank you, Danny.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marge, this is a beautiful poem, and so true. Great job.

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
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