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Wet
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Reflection

A reflection from the water,
My image i see before me.
A ripple causes it to break,
Like my soul inside me.
From the center out,
Waves of madness sepperate.
It causes confusion,
But becomes more calm then before.
I can respect the stillness alround me now,
Before I couldn't,
Until I jumped into the water.
© Copyright 2000 David Danielson - All Rights Reserved
redheart angrybraids
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1 posted 05-05-2000 12:28 AM       View Profile for redheart angrybraids   Email redheart angrybraids   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for redheart angrybraids

this was simple and to the point, i also could relate the you image of the soul, and the respect for the calm and the wild.
kindly,
redheart angrybraids
Sudhir Iyer
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2 posted 05-05-2000 04:10 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Nice poem, tilts towards a suicidal tendency, though, which is not a very honourable way to end....

Simple but effective, check out a few spelling errors though!

Keep writing,
Sudhir

 In any moment of decision,
The best thing you can do is the right thing,
The next-best thing is the wrong thing,
And the worst thing you can do is nothing.
- Theodore Roosevelt
Cerenity
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3 posted 05-06-2000 05:32 PM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Wet,

This is rally good here I loved the imagery, thank you for sharing.

Cerenity
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