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Once Upon A Dream

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A Romantic Heart
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0 posted 05-04-2000 10:21 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for A Romantic Heart




'Twas A dream,
One of many colors and schemes,
That filled my day with thoughts,
Thoughts of our conversations,
And our in betweens,

Your words, your mischevious laughter,
How my mind has savored every word spoken,
Today, tomorrow, tonight, my mind will hold
them as memory tokens,

Words conveyed, deeply felt,
To make my mind ponder,
My heart to melt,

As we danced to conversations tune,
I closed my eyes and envisioned,
Every fleeting moment that ended to soon,
So My heart deeply listened,
As my face glistened,

I could see in my minds eye,
You and I,
A romantic spring night,
Italian boat ride with wine,
Beautiful view in sight,

Sunset on a warm, breezy spring evening,
Your hand interlocked inside mine,
Gently squeezing,like a heart beating, in perfect time,

During the boat ride across the lake,
You and I share our life stories,
Open our hearts,share our biggest mistakes,

Closer we become,
As the night moves on,
To dinner, A play,

You have a way,
How you take me on journeys without a car,
With you I feel I can reach the stars,

Go to the ends of the earth,
To mars,without lifting a finger,
How I want these thoughts to linger,

What is this magic, this mystery,
This chemistry I feel?
For there is something connecting us,
Something touchable, real,

I open my eyes,
To realize,
Across the distance,
To where you are,
I am here, you are there,
This dream is what we share,

Our souls now connect,
With no in betweens,
I feel you are real,
Our hearts express what the other heart means,

You have forever captivated me..."Once Upon A Dream"

One question is all I ask,
Will this dream forever be a dream?
Can it become real?
Don't let our moment pass,
Let us create at last,

A Dream we can touch and feel happily everafter!!!







[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 05-05-2000).]
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netswan
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1 posted 05-04-2000 10:25 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

You are a Romantic Heart, my dear.
and a very good poet --)

Lovely poem --

netswan
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2 posted 05-04-2000 10:30 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Netswan...you're too sweet, too kind, thanks for your reply...a tear is in my eye!
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3 posted 05-05-2000 01:30 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

RH,
another piece to make me sigh. your work reflects your name (A Romantic Heart)

All my love,
Jeffrey

 I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep
hsystems
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4 posted 05-05-2000 01:48 AM       View Profile for hsystems   Email hsystems   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hsystems's Home Page   View IP for hsystems

RH - Ah, L'amour!  This is a wonderful poem...it made me sigh as I thought about how much it describes my Pamela and I - and also brought back memories of long-distance relationships of the past.  Thank you for sharing this beautiful work of art!


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5 posted 05-05-2000 01:58 AM       View Profile for TerryW   Email TerryW   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit TerryW's Home Page   View IP for TerryW

RomanticHeart,
    Dear, you really do have a romantic heart!  I love your poem, and I felt every word.

One question is all I ask,
Will this dream forever be a dream?
Can it become real?
Don't let our moment pass,
Let us create at last,

A Dream we can touch and feel happily everafter!!!

    I have a feeling you will get the answer that you want dear!


Love Ya~

 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.
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6 posted 05-05-2000 04:19 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Troy...I wrote this from experiance of being away from the one you love and how every moment is treasured, I am glad it brought back memories for you..

Jeff..thanks for taking time to read and reply to my poems and for the compliments!I notice you read alot of mine, and I am honored by your replies!

Terry..I enjoyed your reply, I try to be romantic, when I get sweet replies like these,I feel I am doing my best!! thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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7 posted 05-05-2000 05:42 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

So beautifully romantic! Very well done, RH!  

Denise
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8 posted 05-05-2000 08:10 PM       View Profile for bboog   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit bboog's Home Page   View IP for bboog

RH~
  I think you asked two questions in the last stanza, not one, but hey, who's counting?
  I liked "memory tokens" and "conversations tune". Keep taking those romantic journeys without a car, and write about those trips too. Happy Cinco de Mayo.
best regards,
bboog


[This message has been edited by bboog (edited 05-05-2000).]
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9 posted 05-05-2000 09:17 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

RH,
Beautiful and romantic writing as always, my friend!!!  Great job!!!  Hope all your dreams come true!!!  You deserve it!!!!  


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
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10 posted 05-06-2000 12:11 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Dee...I was inspired by a special muse glad you liked it! thanks!!!

Bboog..Yes I did ask two questions!!!haha! oh well thats my inquistive side... Thanks for the wisdom and compliments!!!

Lone...thank you very much, I hope they do to Thanks again!!!
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