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rene
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0 posted 05-04-2000 10:20 PM       View Profile for rene   Email rene   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for rene

i wasn't aware
i'd shoot this far
when you shot
my star

didn't see
the fallen line
when i stepped
out of my time

wish i could
have stood the test
not crashed and burned
like all the rest



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Clever poem


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rene
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ta.
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this was different!~~~don't understand the title though.
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