»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #7
»
The Guiding Light
| Open Poetry #7 |
|
The Guiding Light |
|
|
Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
A bright light shines through a placid night. The velvet sky envelops all around the dewy grounds. There is a warm wind blowing the stars around, and all your dreams are at the end of it all. Your life doesn't always go the right way, and things that may happen may be wrong But if you look on the bright side of the things taking place, It's usually gonna turn out alright in the end. If you look for the light shining through the dark night, and you follow the light to the end, times may be hard on your journey to the end, but your dreams are at the end of it all. ***I did this poem to a song that happened to be stuck in my head, so I don't really know if it sounds too good. If it doesn't... oops...  "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying." Harry Anderson, "Night Court" *Cassandra Roseen* |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Cassandra Roseen - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Beautiful Cassers! I like seeing a positive additude from you. I know that can be hard, because you're a lot like me, my friend. I enjoyed this a lot, wonderful imagery, nice flow. Good job! *Krista Knutson* "Lonliness is the human condition." *Mark Twain, in the book "The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn"* |
||
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
*standing* BRAVO!!! You always have to look for the light at the end of the tunnel, the dawn at the end of the darkness, the lighthouse on the shore. . . oh, you know what I mean!! This was a great poem, would that we could all take this to heart. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
||
|
Dusk Treader
Moderator
Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
Wonderful Cassers! Like Krista, I'm glad to see the positive attitude, definetly something that should be taken to heart! (Is there an echo in here?) Uplifting, my friend... Thanks for being my guiding light.. Abrahm Simons "...Watching fate as it flows down the path we have chose" - Trent Reznor, "We're in this Together" |
||
|
Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Thank you, all of yah, for the replies! I've been gradually becoming more positive. My finger puppets have helped me, and so have you. Krista and Abe, yah've been my greatest help. Thanx!"Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying." Harry Anderson, "Night Court" *Cassandra Roseen* |
||
|
Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
DE.......great writing!!!! I like the analogy of the light at the end of the tunnel. So very true.....you never know what is out there until you explore new ground. Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
||
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DawnEclipse~ I like the hope envisioned in this. You've done it well ... no 'oops' needed. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
