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Same Old Love Poem

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Tuck
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0 posted 05-04-2000 09:22 PM       View Profile for Tuck   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tuck

What color is love
If it's not the wine of your smile?
What shape is love
If it's not the heart of your heart on mine?
How does love feel
If it's not your touch,
Your smile upon my face?
How does love sound
If it's not my body rolling
In the gentleness of your words?
What does love look like
If it's not the warmth of your heart,
The heart of your love?
What does love say to lovers
If not "I love you"?
What is love
If not you and me?

© Copyright 2000 Tuck - All Rights Reserved
netswan
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1 posted 05-04-2000 09:27 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

What a sweet love poem, Tuck

Great comparison's using senses

netswan
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 05-04-2000 09:39 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Tuck~
Well, someone has a tender heart.
This was enchanting to read.
Thanks for sharing it.
~*Marge*~


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Butterflies_dont_cry
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3 posted 05-04-2000 09:45 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

Tuck* I really enjoyed the way this was put together with question and answer form, Great style, a timeless subject and it seems to me that a very sensitive and caring heart composed this...a combination that is awesome!!

 Hold me for yesterday
Kiss me for tomorrow
But love me for today.

Sven
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4 posted 05-04-2000 11:27 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Excellent Tuck!

I liked the question and answer form here too!

A conversation with the one you love. . . oh, and welcome!!

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Janet Marie
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5 posted 05-05-2000 01:22 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

What shape is love
If it's not the heart of your heart on mine?
--------------
How does love sound
If it's not my body rolling
In the gentleness of your words?
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I LOVE this poem...
the sentiments of it are perfect.
very endearing and sweet...
great work here.



 ~as always, Take Care,JM~
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I know it's been a long road
To get these towns behind me and I
Will gladly reap what we may sow--
I am there for you ...
and you're there for me ...
Are you waiting for
Heart in hand
Woman and man
See me where I stand I am
Heart
Heart in hand
~vertical horizon~

Tia
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since 05-05-2000
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6 posted 05-05-2000 11:30 PM       View Profile for Tia   Email Tia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tia

awww...that was a beautiful poem. keep writing ...
Tia

 I'd rather have someone hate me for who i am,than to have someone like me for who i'm pretending to be
lorilockheart
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since 05-06-2000
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7 posted 05-06-2000 05:16 PM       View Profile for lorilockheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lorilockheart

Tuck,

Thanks for welcoming me to Passions.  After reading this poem I think we're kindred spirits.

Thanks,
Lori
Cerenity
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8 posted 05-07-2000 06:45 PM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Tuck,

Oh you do speak of love so wonderfully my friend, someone is going to be very happy in life with you. Very much enjoyed this.

Cerenity
 
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