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Same Old Love Poem
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Same Old Love Poem |
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Tuck Junior Member
since 2000-04-29
Posts 27 |
What color is love If it's not the wine of your smile? What shape is love If it's not the heart of your heart on mine? How does love feel If it's not your touch, Your smile upon my face? How does love sound If it's not my body rolling In the gentleness of your words? What does love look like If it's not the warmth of your heart, The heart of your love? What does love say to lovers If not "I love you"? What is love If not you and me? |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
What a sweet love poem, Tuck Great comparison's using senses netswan |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tuck~ Well, someone has a tender heart. This was enchanting to read. Thanks for sharing it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Tuck* I really enjoyed the way this was put together with question and answer form, Great style, a timeless subject and it seems to me that a very sensitive and caring heart composed this...a combination that is awesome!! Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent Tuck! I liked the question and answer form here too! A conversation with the one you love. . . oh, and welcome!! ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
What shape is love If it's not the heart of your heart on mine? -------------- How does love sound If it's not my body rolling In the gentleness of your words? --------------- I LOVE this poem... the sentiments of it are perfect. very endearing and sweet... great work here. ~as always, Take Care,JM~ -------------- I know it's been a long road To get these towns behind me and I Will gladly reap what we may sow-- I am there for you ... and you're there for me ... Are you waiting for Heart in hand Woman and man See me where I stand I am Heart Heart in hand ~vertical horizon~ |
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Tia Junior Member
since 2000-05-05
Posts 41massachusetts |
awww...that was a beautiful poem. keep writing ... Tia I'd rather have someone hate me for who i am,than to have someone like me for who i'm pretending to be |
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lorilockheart Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 206Alabama |
Tuck, Thanks for welcoming me to Passions. After reading this poem I think we're kindred spirits. Thanks, Lori |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Tuck, Oh you do speak of love so wonderfully my friend, someone is going to be very happy in life with you. Very much enjoyed this. Cerenity |
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