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Willyg76
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0 posted 2000-05-04 09:06 PM


You'll go beyond heaven and touch the true peace and life of love


I wrote this just now for a contest using limited amount of words and the words they gave you


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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-05-04 09:36 PM


Willy~
Nice .... they can be arranged to have many different meanings ...

'You'll go beyond heaven and touch the true peace and life of love'
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Beyond Heaven, you'll go and touch the peace of life and true love.

Beyond peace and love, you'll go and touch the true life of Heaven.

Go beyond true peace and love and you'll touch the life of Heaven.

Beyond life you'll go and touch the true
peace and love of Heaven.

This was fun ... thanks.
~*Marge*~


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Willyg76
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2 posted 2000-05-04 09:42 PM


Glad you had fun with my poem =0)
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