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*~Juliet~*
Junior Member
since 2000-05-02
Posts 19
Key West

0 posted 2000-05-04 05:56 PM




You are my love,
You are my life,
Always there,
Through all my strife.

You make me laugh,
You make me smile,
Even if we only talk,
For a little while.

I want to be with you,
Until the end,
From dusk 'till dawn,
Again & again.

Please reassure me,
I'll always be yours,
Whatever it takes,
My love, my amor. *

© Copyright 2000 Carly - All Rights Reserved
vandana
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since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463
USA
1 posted 2000-05-04 06:41 PM


I LIKE THE POEM VERY MUCH.ENJOYED THIS POEM.!!!!!!
Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
2 posted 2000-05-04 07:42 PM


A sweet declaration of love! Nice poem..  
Tuck
Junior Member
since 2000-04-29
Posts 27

3 posted 2000-05-04 09:46 PM


very boss poem, juliet!  
WhiteNite
Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 241
Montgomery, AL
4 posted 2000-05-04 09:50 PM


Your name captured my attention and then your poetry stole a few beats from my heart... once again.. someone is very lucky. =)  Thanks for teh read.

 "Don't let your character get camoflaged with your environment.
Find who you are and let it stay in its true colors." --Rachel Joy Scott



Sven
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
5 posted 2000-05-04 10:58 PM


This is excellent Juliet. . . welcome to Passions. . . your muse speaks loudly through your pen. . . thank you for letting us hear. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


*~Juliet~*
Junior Member
since 2000-05-02
Posts 19
Key West
6 posted 2000-05-07 10:40 PM


Tnx for the compliment, Vandana, Poet deVine, & Tuck!  

How sweet, White Nite, thank you so much!!!!      

Tnx, Sven...I'll be trying to post more later! =)

Btw- If anyone wants to contact me, my email is: titanica6@juno.com  

Zelda
Junior Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 43
NOVA
7 posted 2000-05-07 10:44 PM


Simple and sweet this is.
Enjoyed!
Z

Aimster
Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
8 posted 2000-05-07 11:03 PM


--Juliet

This was beautiful hon...full of sweet love and joy. i think spring fever is really catching and heating up the passions forum as of late. at any rate, i enjoyed reading this very much. take care and best wishes.

amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

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