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Do You Know I Love You

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Cerenity
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0 posted 05-04-2000 04:06 PM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Cerenity


Do You Know If I Love You

How do you know I did
not hold back a potion of my love.
This realm in which you think
you have insight, you are lacking
wisdom.

The mere look of sadness
upon my face, lack of gleam in
my eyes, no trace of a
smile that would entice you in
to play.

Do I jump at the sight of
your presence’s, do I hover in wait
of an invitation to come
in to you, “think” where do you see
my physical self?

Do you share in what I fancy,
you can’t even agree with my dislike’s.
You have to prove your point
to the realm of death and I am not
free of you until I swear your
right in all.

Are you aware of any
personalities I may have, could you
maintain the same thoughts
I have in any mind set. How could
you possibly know of me, when
“we” does not exist.

Do you know that I love
you, or is it just something you think
is there because I am.

I have gone to the ends
of the earth to try and fix this lost
cause, and I can tell you
this, I have not given of myself
to the very depth’s of loves
realm.

Now I ask you again, do you
know that I have given all of my love
to you?


By,  Cerenity

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netswan
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1 posted 05-04-2000 05:26 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Hi Cerenity --- Great Job!
Enjoyed reading the flow of this and
the strength in it.

netswan
vandana
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2 posted 05-04-2000 06:34 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

Nice poem.Enjoyed the read.
Lone Wolf
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3 posted 05-04-2000 07:38 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Cerenity.....this was filled with such feeling, my friend.  Very nice writing!!  I know exactly how you are feeling.  

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
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4 posted 05-05-2000 12:11 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Cerenity~
I hope you know that I care that it gets better for you.  FOR YOU !
Keep to your goals, hon.
I applaud your determination.

'How could
you possibly know of me, when
“we” does not exist.'

You exist ... and don't forget it !
Love and hugs
~*Marge*~



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TerryW
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5 posted 05-05-2000 02:34 AM       View Profile for TerryW   Email TerryW   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit TerryW's Home Page   View IP for TerryW

Cerenity~
     My dear, I give you a standing ovation.  I understand what you are saying dear.  All too often those we care most about do take for granted that they are the end all and be all for us.  But we always have a little love left.  And I promise you, you will find someone who will love and know it for sure, and not think that they know you love them just because "you are there".


Love Ya!




 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.
Cerenity
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6 posted 05-05-2000 08:26 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Netswan,
I wish I could grasp this strength that is mentioned, thank you for your reply.

Vandana,
Thank you for your reply.

Lone Wolf,
Thank you my friend, I wish you didn't know.

Marge,
The word insparation comes to mind from your words, I know you care I read it in your poetry just how much you do, its people like you that keep people like me going, thank you so much.

Terry,
Boy do they, but I feel he does not even know what he does to me, some people will just never see how they really treat others ya know. Thank you for your kind words.

Love,  Cerenity
Danny Holloway
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7 posted 05-05-2000 11:53 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Enjoyed reading this, though if has a strong feeling of personal expression.  Hope all is well with you...
dh


 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.

amazon_lover
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8 posted 05-05-2000 12:59 PM       View Profile for amazon_lover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amazon_lover

Hi Cerenity!
You've done it dear. I love her but I had some difficulty initially in knowing something which was hidden in words but very obvious when we speak and be together.
I feel your situation and I've walked in your shoes for quite sometime. But wait for the day when you both are assured that it's not going to fall apart due to some uncertainties. If its going to fall apart sometime at a future date or someone of you  give up on this love,it was not mean't to be a strong relationship.
Sincerely
A_L
Jeffrey Carter
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9 posted 05-05-2000 03:02 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Know you are never alone...we all here at Passions have a shoulder to lend anytime you need it. I like the determination you have shown in this piece. Continue to be strong m'friend.

All my love,
Jeffrey

 I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep
 
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