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Moonbeams Glow
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Moonbeams Glow |
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DestinysCharm Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 90 |
Moonbeams Glow Moonbeams glow passes over as thought waves filter through the sky... Only in one's wildest dreams could images be so real... Imagination at it's finest hour drawing magic silhouettes among the stars... Alone together you and I touching whispers from angelic lullabies... Only in my wishful thoughts do you illusively exist... Playing all the chords in tune twisting melodies to time... A treasure in my heart masking away doubts an everlasting glow as darkness imparts... A glimpse of future harmony knowing kindness can be found within this soul... Moonbeams glow passes over it's you I vision above me... Collecting my thoughts to share as your smile shines so bright... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Oh, this is so beautiful, Destiny! I has such a lovely wistful quality to it! You are a very talented writer! I look forward to more from you!  Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Destiny~ This is charming. A wonderful look at your 'moonbeams'. I love anything to do with the moon ... so the title caught my eye for sure. Really enjoyed it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Simply wonderful DestinysCharm. . . the thought of moonbeams is quite nice. . . Exellent poem... ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
That poem was beautiful! My favorite line: "Imagination at it's finest hour drawing magic silhouettes among the stars..." I look forward to reading much much more! "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying." Harry Anderson, "Night Court" *Cassandra Roseen* |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
DestinysCharm, I love the magic in your moonbeam's glow! Very good poem -- wonderful magic imagery that ever so slowly dances the mind away from reality into imagination's warm embrace! I love it! ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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