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jkm1
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since 2000-04-30
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0 posted 2000-05-04 09:46 AM


This illusion
So much better than reality
Voice without a face
Words without a form
A warm breeze
Unexpected
Always welcome
Cool, stillness in its absence
Alone again
Wondering if it was real
Longing for it to return
This illusion
Perfect
Pure
Close your eyes
And dream
For this illusion
So much better than reality



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poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
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1 posted 2000-05-04 10:45 AM


A wonderful little piece here that really touches my heart, because I am a dreamer.  Illusional fantasies are a big part of my life - unfortunately, they RULE my life at times!     Nothing wrong with dreaming of something fantastic...what's fun, is making those dreams become reality!  Now that's the real challenge within illusion.  Thank you for sharing this magical piece with me!  I'll go now, as I have dreams to make come true!  hehehe
Denise
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2 posted 2000-05-04 10:52 AM


This is very beautifully done and thought provoking!

Denise

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