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Butterflies_dont_cry
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0 posted 05-04-2000 09:20 AM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

A Class In "Smooth"

A night on the town, just me and a few
A dab here, a dusting there, and we’re ready to down a few

Ready to dance and have some fun
Who knows when you might find “the one”

But alas the usual lines begin to flow
From “haven’t I seen you before” to “take me with you when you go”

I started to ponder upon the third come on half baked
That perhaps these men needed a class to take

Come one Come all to a class in Smooth 101
I’ll show you rogues just how it’s done

Look at my eyes not at my chest
Take some notes there will be a test

The class went well and  they all seemed to learn
Then came the Final Test, each waited his turn

One at a time my student’s gave their best line
And one after another my Pupil’s did shine

All passed with flying colors the class a success
They learned to use words like an intimate caress

Out on the town just me and few
Walk in the doors, I spot a student or two

Then a stranger with hair of gold and eyes of blue
walked up to me...I was shaken clean through

He said he had never seen a sparkle quite like mine
and asked to share a moment of my time

Now I the Professor of Smooth 101 knew the lines galore
So drawing on my vast knowledge I uttered....”Haven’t I seen you here before?”



 Hold me for yesterday
Kiss me for tomorrow
But love me for today.





[This message has been edited by Butterflies_dont_cry (edited 05-04-2000).]
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ESP
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1 posted 05-04-2000 09:30 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Lol...this is great!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
A.C.Turner
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2 posted 05-04-2000 09:51 AM       View Profile for A.C.Turner   Email A.C.Turner   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A.C.Turner

I am totally cracking up here. This is clever and hilarious. Thanks for my morning laugh! Peace to you. ACT.
Janet Marie
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3 posted 05-04-2000 10:07 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

creative and clever for sure my girl...
and way too true...
personally I never fell for the lines...
BUT write me poem and Im yours LOL
Im ssoooo easy for a poem LOL
great job ...love seeing you enjoy your writing  
loves ya ,jm
Denise
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4 posted 05-04-2000 10:56 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

ROFL   Oh my, oh my!! hehehehe

Denise
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5 posted 05-04-2000 11:57 AM       View Profile for warmhrt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for warmhrt

Toooo cute!!! Loved it...and ain't it the truth!

Kris

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A local habitation and a name ~ Shakespeare
Butterflies_dont_cry
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6 posted 05-04-2000 01:00 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry


After "Changing Seasons" I needed a smile   thank you for sharing it with me.


 Hold me for yesterday
Kiss me for tomorrow
But love me for today.

Aimster
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7 posted 05-04-2000 02:35 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

This was gr8 and very funny! Thanks for the wonderful laugh. I really enjoyed this. you are a versatile poet who can write many different feelings all with the stroke of your poetic pen!

take care,
amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
Martie
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8 posted 05-04-2000 02:49 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

LOL..This was great!  Thanks so much for the smile this morning!
Parker
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9 posted 05-04-2000 05:04 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Butterflies, your good, really loved this. Nice twist, our best lines just disappear when our eyes light up and our heart skips a beat..... I usually faint. Of course I tell them after I've never talked to a Goddess before. Thanks for the smile.....  

Parker
Butterflies_dont_cry
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10 posted 05-04-2000 06:34 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry


Amy* you are much to kind!!!  I appreciate you reading Thank you  

Martie* I'm glad you enjoyed it  

Parker* OHHHHH you are good!!! lol Thanks for reading  


 Hold me for yesterday
Kiss me for tomorrow
But love me for today.

David2
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11 posted 05-04-2000 09:02 PM       View Profile for David2   Email David2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for David2

Thanks for the great big smile this planted on my face. How funny!
      David2
WhiteNite
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12 posted 05-04-2000 09:16 PM       View Profile for WhiteNite   Email WhiteNite   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhiteNite's Home Page   View IP for WhiteNite

Girl this one got me.  I don't use lines... hell.. I usually don't try to "pickup" women at all... that's probably why I'm single huh?  But anyways... I enjoyed it, thanks.

 "Don't let your character get camoflaged with your environment.
Find who you are and let it stay in its true colors." --Rachel Joy Scott


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13 posted 05-04-2000 09:21 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

ButterfliesDC~
Nice to see that sense of humor
come into play.  
This is really cute.
Giggling here.
~*Marge*~


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Tuck
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14 posted 05-04-2000 09:26 PM       View Profile for Tuck   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tuck

heehee, awesome!  very cool, and may men near and far heed these words...
Butterflies_dont_cry
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15 posted 05-04-2000 09:40 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

Big Thank You's to all   I think I have more fun seeing your reaction to this one than I did writing it....and it was alot of fun    Thank you so much for reading and for sharing your *g*'s and *s*'s  

 Hold me for yesterday
Kiss me for tomorrow
But love me for today.

Sven
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16 posted 05-04-2000 11:29 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Hey Butterflies. . . where do I sign up?  LOL

This was terrific. . . had me going right till the end!  And who hasn't been tongue tied at the wrong moment!  LOL

Great poem!!

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

TerryW
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17 posted 05-05-2000 02:39 AM       View Profile for TerryW   Email TerryW   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit TerryW's Home Page   View IP for TerryW

ButterfliesDC~
     Dear, I love it!  With all my heart, I love it!  I have laughed until I am crying--because it is soo true!  I can just see it in my mind's eye!   You are truly gifted, my dear!


Love Ya~



 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.
Butterflies_dont_cry
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18 posted 05-05-2000 07:03 AM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

I'm so happy that I could share the laughter in this with you both  

Sven*the line forms to the right  

Terry* I'm glad I caused a smile with this one   and happy tears for once  


 Hold me for yesterday
Kiss me for tomorrow
But love me for today.

FadingSun
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19 posted 05-05-2000 07:50 AM       View Profile for FadingSun   Email FadingSun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for FadingSun

Butterflies,

You are just bursting with creativity and personality.
I'm still giggling a bit.
Wonderful wonderful poem.

~S
 
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