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A Class in "Smooth"......Now Taking New Students :)
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A Class in "Smooth"......Now Taking New Students :) |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
A Class In "Smooth" A night on the town, just me and a few A dab here, a dusting there, and we’re ready to down a few Ready to dance and have some fun Who knows when you might find “the one” But alas the usual lines begin to flow From “haven’t I seen you before” to “take me with you when you go” I started to ponder upon the third come on half baked That perhaps these men needed a class to take Come one Come all to a class in Smooth 101 I’ll show you rogues just how it’s done Look at my eyes not at my chest Take some notes there will be a test The class went well and they all seemed to learn Then came the Final Test, each waited his turn One at a time my student’s gave their best line And one after another my Pupil’s did shine All passed with flying colors the class a success They learned to use words like an intimate caress Out on the town just me and few Walk in the doors, I spot a student or two Then a stranger with hair of gold and eyes of blue walked up to me...I was shaken clean through He said he had never seen a sparkle quite like mine and asked to share a moment of my time Now I the Professor of Smooth 101 knew the lines galore So drawing on my vast knowledge I uttered....”Haven’t I seen you here before?” < !signature--> Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. [This message has been edited by Butterflies_dont_cry (edited 05-04-2000).] |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Lol...this is great! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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A.C.Turner Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 83Reading, Pa.Home of Bardfest |
I am totally cracking up here. This is clever and hilarious. Thanks for my morning laugh! Peace to you. ACT. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
creative and clever for sure my girl... and way too true... personally I never fell for the lines... BUT write me poem and Im yours LOL Im ssoooo easy for a poem LOL great job ...love seeing you enjoy your writing  loves ya ,jm |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
ROFL Oh my, oh my!! heheheheDenise |
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warmhrt Senior Member
since 1999-12-18
Posts 1563 |
Toooo cute!!! Loved it...and ain't it the truth! Kris the poet's pen...gives to airy nothing A local habitation and a name ~ Shakespeare |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 After "Changing Seasons" I needed a smile  thank you for sharing it with me.Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
This was gr8 and very funny! Thanks for the wonderful laugh. I really enjoyed this. you are a versatile poet who can write many different feelings all with the stroke of your poetic pen! take care, amy ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
LOL..This was great! Thanks so much for the smile this morning! |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Butterflies, your good, really loved this. Nice twist, our best lines just disappear when our eyes light up and our heart skips a beat..... I usually faint. Of course I tell them after I've never talked to a Goddess before. Thanks for the smile..... Parker |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Amy* you are much to kind!!! I appreciate you reading Thank you Martie* I'm glad you enjoyed it Parker* OHHHHH you are good!!! lol Thanks for reading Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
Thanks for the great big smile this planted on my face. How funny! David2 |
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WhiteNite Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 241Montgomery, AL |
"Don't let your character get camoflaged with your environment. Find who you are and let it stay in its true colors." --Rachel Joy Scott |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ButterfliesDC~ Nice to see that sense of humor come into play. This is really cute. Giggling here. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Tuck Junior Member
since 2000-04-29
Posts 27 |
heehee, awesome! very cool, and may men near and far heed these words... |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Big Thank You's to all I think I have more fun seeing your reaction to this one than I did writing it....and it was alot of fun Thank you so much for reading and for sharing your *g*'s and *s*'s Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Hey Butterflies. . . where do I sign up? LOL This was terrific. . . had me going right till the end! And who hasn't been tongue tied at the wrong moment! LOL Great poem!! ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
ButterfliesDC~ Dear, I love it! With all my heart, I love it! I have laughed until I am crying--because it is soo true! I can just see it in my mind's eye! You are truly gifted, my dear! Love Ya~ ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
I'm so happy that I could share the laughter in this with you both Sven*the line forms to the right Terry* I'm glad I caused a smile with this one and happy tears for once Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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FadingSun Member
since 2000-05-01
Posts 76Southern California |
Butterflies, You are just bursting with creativity and personality. I'm still giggling a bit. Wonderful wonderful poem. ~S |
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