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untitled and unrequited love

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Tuck
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0 posted 05-04-2000 08:31 AM       View Profile for Tuck   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tuck

(I did not write this poem- someone wrote it for me and i fell in love with it...i hope you enjoy)

you are far
when i could have been your star
you listened to people
who scared you to death, and from my heart,
strange that you were strong enough
to even make a start
but you'll never find
peace of mind
till you listen to your heart

people
you can never change the way they feel
better let them do just what they will
for they will,
if you let them,
steal your heart from you
peoplewill always make a lover feel a fool
but you knew i loved you,
we could have shown them all
we should have seen love through

and people
will always make a lover feel a fool,
but you knew i loved you
we could have shown them all

but remember this,
every other kiss
that you ever give,
long as we both live,
when you need the hand of another man,
one you can really surreneder with,
i will wait for you,
like i always do,
there's something there
that can't compare with any other-

© Copyright 2000 Tuck - All Rights Reserved
angelswing
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1 posted 05-04-2000 09:00 AM       View Profile for angelswing   Email angelswing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angelswing

WELCOME TO PASSIONS. I see that you have good taste when you say that you love this poem, it is very expresive and really touching . When are we going to see more ?
Thanks for brightening my day .


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Cerenity
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since 02-16-2000
Posts 2712
Escondido-California


2 posted 05-05-2000 09:01 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Tuck,

This is a lovely poem thank you for sharing it, When can we all see something from your heart? We are all a friendly bunch here at passions I think you will like it here.

Welcome,

Cerenity
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State of constant confusion!


3 posted 05-05-2000 02:14 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Welcome to passion's .....I think you're gonna like it here.

All my love,
Jeffrey

 I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep
A Romantic Heart
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4 posted 05-05-2000 04:33 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Welcome to passions and thanks for sharing that poem with us! I see why you liked it!
Lone Wolf
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5 posted 05-05-2000 09:51 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Welcome to Passions!  Thank you for sharing the poem.....it was beautiful!!  

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Zelda
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since 02-01-2000
Posts 43
NOVA


6 posted 05-05-2000 11:10 PM       View Profile for Zelda   Email Zelda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Zelda

Thank you for sharing this--the thoughts are lovely.  
I know the feelings expressed very well...for me there is only one, and I will wait forever for him.
Welcome!
Z
 
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