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angelswing
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since 2000-02-10
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0 posted 2000-05-04 08:23 AM


Dreams that disappear .

Dreams that disappear,
Your pen has lots of ink,
No matter what you do or say,
I’m always forced to think,
Sincerity is always key,
The door I’ll never breach,
I wish your lies were close to me,
But now your out of reach .

Written by Tom Baker



 With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one .

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Enola
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since 2000-02-11
Posts 138
England
1 posted 2000-05-04 09:21 AM


Just wanty to see if this thing still works.  Lovely poetry - as always!

 The tragedy of it is that nobody sees the look of desperation on my face. Thousands and thousands of us, and we're passing one another without a look of recognition.

Tuck
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since 2000-04-29
Posts 27

2 posted 2000-05-04 04:38 PM


Hello!  How can dreams disappear, if one is forced to think?  Very nice-

[This message has been edited by Tuck (edited 05-04-2000).]

angelswing
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since 2000-02-10
Posts 705
United Kingdom
3 posted 2000-05-08 07:12 AM


cheers debs - you have made me much happier today .
Tuck - Welcome . And some of the time, the more you think, the more the illusions that your subconsious makes for you become total lies . When someone you care for leaves, it can force you to relise this .

L.of.L. Tom .


 With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one .

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