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We Two

When last my head upon my pillow rests
Incessant longings smoulder deep inside.
An ever present weight upon my chest
Is evidence this love won't be denied.
Then comes the midnight knock upon my door
And shrouded in a veil of moonlit mist,
The beauty kings abandon kingdoms for,
My Sweet, whose satin cheeks have angels kissed.
The furies of our pent up passions raged
As tears of solemn gratitude were wept.
The hungers of our love at last uncaged
And promises of pure devotion kept.

Exquisite moments shared in endless bliss,
For hoped for love was never love like this.


© Copyright 2000 David William La Belle - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 05-04-2000 06:48 AM       View Profile for Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Email Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Roniece Dawson-Bruce

David, David, David!  such exquisite writing my friend - beautifully done!  

Roniece
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2 posted 05-04-2000 09:06 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Lovely!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
Janet Marie
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3 posted 05-04-2000 09:47 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

When last my head upon my pillow rests
Incessant longings smoulder deep inside.
An ever present weight upon my chest
Is evidence this love won't be denied.
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Exquisite moments shared in endless bliss,
For hoped for love was never love like this.
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*SIGHS* *smile*

this one is so great...love the imagery and the use of gothic images and the uncaged hunger and lust mixed with bliss and devotion aint half bad either
very nice D2...VERY
jm
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4 posted 05-04-2000 09:58 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Oh my! Absolutely beautiful, David!

'As tears of solemn gratitude were wept'

Love doesn't get any better than that!

Denise
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5 posted 05-04-2000 10:08 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Well....geesh, what to say to something so short yet sooo sweet!  First of all, I love this style.  It's easy to read, and each line packs it's own punch so to speak.  There's no way I could pick one line to be my fav, but if I had to, it would be, "My sweet, whose satin cheeks have angels kissed..."  Where did you get this?  If these are the thoughts that run through your head....well....I like your head! Superb and exquisite all wrapped up in one!   Er....two!  
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6 posted 05-04-2000 07:27 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Are you sure your name isn't William? Lovely sonnet sir!!  
Corinne
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Sensual and bursting with passion. Yeah.

Corinne
 
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