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eyesplus2
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0 posted 05-04-2000 03:55 AM       View Profile for eyesplus2   Email eyesplus2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for eyesplus2

       Two shall become one
                                                                you and I shall become us
                                                                                 apart we are strong
                                                                                                   yet weak
                                                                                                       yet together
                                                                                                             we are weak
                                                                                                                   yet very strong
                                                                                                                              indivsible
                                                                                                                                a union of two hearts
                                                                                                                                                     two souls
                                                                                                                                                           two past
                                                                                                                                                              one today
                                                                                                                                                               and one tomorrow
                                                                                                                                                                    Two shall become

      


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ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....


1 posted 05-04-2000 04:46 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Interesting format! I also like the way you used the words.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


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tracie66
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2 posted 05-04-2000 05:18 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Eyes~
very interesting both in description and format, yet I felt drawn in by this.
WONDERFUL  
Tracie


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Cerenity
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Hi eyeplus2,

Its neet how your wonderful feelings run wild on the the page you have control yet not,
strong yet weak, apart then together
I like this much.

Cerenity


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mete out
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4 posted 05-05-2000 08:44 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

***eyesplus2
i really like the flow of your work.
i like the feeling of being carried of with it.
great, as usual.


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.


 
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